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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/tamil- nadu-custodial-deaths-up- vikas-dubey-encounter-police- brutality-6504199/ - In the intro, briefly mention the issue of the nexus and Vohra Committee report.
- In the body, mention the problems created by the nexus such as rising and institutionalisation corruption, criminalisation of politics, illegalities by the police etc. In the suggestion mention the law for prohibiting the criminals from contesting elections, changes in the criminal justice system as per Malimath committee recommendations, implementing SC direction for the police etc.
- Conclude by stressing the importance of breaking the unholy nexus for the better future of the country.
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Hi Uttam
First tell the issue of nexus then write about the Vohra Committee report.
Its economic not economical, political and administrative are different verticals, not the same !
Explain the issues related to functioning of police.
Solution needs more comprehensive points.
You can write-
-Curbing criminalisation of politics
-Revamping criminal justice system, in this you can also mention that there is a need to create a fund to compensate victims who turn hostile from the pressure of culprits.
-Implementing the Supreme Court’s directive give in Prakash Singh case 2006.
Work on content.
Improve your handwriting and work on grammar.
Work hard, you will improve.
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Hi Taran
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart is appreciable.
It is criminalisation of politics , work on selection of words.
Police is not a problem instead functioning of police is the problem, give proper subheadings.
Good way forward.
Rephrase your conclusion.
Work on handwriting.
Improve your presentation and avoid grammatical and spelling errors.
Avoid using short forms.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
You need to work on your headings, problem of collusion does not make any sense.
Use of flow chart in depicting the issues is appreciable.
After the flow chart, give a separate heading- ‘Impact’ .
You have explained the solutions in a quite comprehensive manner, keep it up.
Good conclusion.
Content is good and well placed.
Work on presentation.
Keep writing , you will succeed.
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Hi PSR
Good introduction.
You have explained the problems caused by this nexus in a good manner.
Way forward is well explained.
Mention Vohra Committee.
Also explain briefly how criminalisation of politics is the bane of society and negation of democracy.
Good conclusion.
Underline keywords.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
You have explained the problems and measures in a comprehensive manner.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
A decent attempt.
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Hi Sneha
Good introduction.
Use of diagram is appreciable.
Before writing the impact, briefly mention the problems caused by this nexus.
Impact and suggestions are well explained.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep working hard, you will succeed.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have explained the causes and impact in a decent manner.
Way forward is quite comprehensive.
The content is good and well placed, keep it up.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Avoid scribbling.
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Hi Sushmitha
Good introduction, avoid using short forms.
Before writing the impact, briefly explain the causes of this nexus.
Some good points in the impact part , but need to add more . Write about the corruption and illegalities of police.
Way forward is quite comprehensive.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Work on handwriting.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Mehul
Lackluster introduction, briefly mention the issue of the nexus and Vohra Committee report.
Issues are well explained, mentioning various committees is appreciable.
Suggestions are explained in a comprehensive manner.
Good conclusion.
Improve your handwriting and work on presentation to get better marks.
Overall a good attempt.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing, you will succeed.
Please check sir
Hi Rahul
Try to complete your answer in maximum two pages.
Scan your answer sheet in proper light,.
Need to rephrase your introduction.
Work on content.
First tell the issue of nexus then write about the Vohra Committee report.
Solution needs more comprehensive points.
You can write-
-Curbing criminalisation of politics
-Revamping criminal justice system, in this you can also mention that there is a need to create a fund to compensate victims who turn hostile from the pressure of culprits.
-Implementing the Supreme Court’s directive give in Prakash Singh case 2006.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using short forms, improve grammar.
Work on handwriting, improve your presentation to get better marks.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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