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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ farmers-protest-farmer-bill- msp-demand-agriculture-sector- 7076046/ - In the intro, mention circumstances which necessitated the contract farming.
- In the body mention advantages like the assurance for farmers, legal remedies, etc. In the issues mentioned in the article.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for addressing the issues in the Act.
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Hi Vaishnavi
Introduction should be of one single paragraph.
Work on space management.
After writing the challenges, write some way forward.
Try to cover different aspects of the issue to fetch better marks.
Good concluding remarks.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Work hard, you will improve.
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Name: Prashant
Email: prashant.kumar@alumni.iitd.ac.in
Hi Prashant
Good introduciton.
Thums up for the structure.
You have good command over content, keep it up.
The demand of the question is thoroughly met.
Good conclusion.
A decent attempt.
Keep working hard !
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Hi Divya
Answer is well started.
Summarise the advantages so that you can write the measures in detail.
Content wise good attempt.
Good conclusion.
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