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- In the introduction briefly explain what renaissance is.
- In the body explain the main features of Indian Renaissance.
Mention the new movements for socio-religious reforms that were started under Raja Ram Mohan Roy and other intellectuals.
It was influenced by western thinkers. Also explain how Indian Renaissance gave rise to study of English literature thoughts, philosophies and books of history - Conclude by reasserting the significance of it to Modern Indian history.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Need to add more points in the reasons, you can write factors under different subheadings like-
– Social and ideological base
-Western education
-Social Conditions
Influence and significance of the Renaissance are explained in a comprehensive manner.
Good conclusion.
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Hi Shubham
Good introduction.
Explain the causes of Indian Renaissance in brief, do not just write the bullet points.
You have explained the features in a good manner .
Also write the impact of it under a different heading, You can write that Indian Renaissance gave rise to study of English literature thoughts, philosophies and books of
history.Over political movements it has some influence and later on it was perfectly adopted by political movements.
Need to summarise your conclusion.
Avoid using short forms.
Keep working hard, you will succeed.
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Hi Taran
Good introduction.
Lack of content in the factors part, You can write factors under different subheadings like-
– Social and ideological base
-Western education
-Social Conditions
In the features , you can write that-
– Renaissance was a new way of studying Indian past was brought in.
-Reinterpretation of Indian religious text and rituals was made, which brought irregularities and malpractices in our religion into light at that time.
-A new movement for socio-religious reforms were started under Raja Ram Mohan Roy and other intellectuals.
-It was influenced by western thinkers.
Read comprehensively to enrich your content.
Good conclusion.
Work on sentence formation.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
Write the causes of rise of Indian renaissance, you can write factors under different subheadings like-
– Social and ideological base
-Western education
-Social Conditions
You have written the significance of Renaissance under the features heading,features were-
-A new way of studying Indian past was brought in.
-Reinterpretation of Indian religious text and rituals was made, which brought irregularities and mal-practices in our religion into light at that time.
-A new movement for socio-religious reforms were started under Raja Ram Mohan Roy and other intellectuals.
Brainstorm before writing.
Good conclusion.
Keep writing.
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Hi Sakshi
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Good introduction.
You have explained the factors in a good manner.
You have written the significance of Renaissance under the features heading,features were-
-A new way of studying Indian past was brought in.
-Reinterpretation of Indian religious text and rituals was made, which brought irregularities and mal-practices in our religion into light at that time.
-A new movement for socio-religious reforms were started under Raja Ram Mohan Roy and other intellectuals.
After it, write the significance or impact.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting.
Underline keywords.
Work hard, you will improve.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
Write the causes of rise of Indian renaissance, you can write factors under different subheadings like-
– Social and ideological base
-Western education
-Social Conditions
You have explained the features and outcome of renaissance in a good manner, keep it up.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Underline keywords.
Use subheadings for better presentation.
Keep writing !
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Hi Parakh
First explain what renaissance is, you can write Renaissance meaning revival or rebirth was the
great transitional movement of Europe .
Write the causes of rise of Indian renaissance, you can write factors under different subheadings like-
– Social and ideological base
-Western education
-Social Conditions
Fragment your content under different headings and subheadings for better presentation.
Content is good but need to work on presentation to get better marks,
Improve your handwriting.
Keep working hard !
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Hi Unnati
Lackluster introduction, briefly explain what renaissance is.
Explain the causes in few lines.
You have explained the features and significance in a decent manner, keep it up.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
You need to work upon your handwriting to get better marks, avoid scribbling and leave proper space between words and lines.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi PS
Good introduction but need to summarise it.
Write the causes of rise of Indian renaissance, you can write factors under different subheadings like-
– Social and ideological base
-Western education
-Social Conditions
You have mix features and significance under one heading, write under different headings to make your answer better structured.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using short forms.
Keep writing, you will succeed.