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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ corona-crisis-india- healthcare-system-universal- basic-income-mgnrega-migrant- workers-6487481/ - In the intro, briefly explain the concept UBI.
- In the body, mention the issues in the implementation like lack of resources, leakages, efficiency etc. In the steps, as suggested in the article, suggest the implementation of MGNREGA in urban areas, application of UBI for women, increasing the days of employment under the MGNREGA, scrapping other benefit schemes to pool the resources etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the potential of UBI in addressing the problems faced by the other schemes and how it could help in the welfare of the people.
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Hi Taran
Lackluster introduction, write the idea behind the Universal Basic Income -every person should have a right to a basic income to cover his needs, just by virtue of being a citizen.
Then write the components of UBI.
Before writing the challenges, write the benefits of UBI.
Follow the proper structure.
It is MGNREGA not MNREGA.
Explain how UBI envisages an uncompromised social safety net .
Good conclusion.
Work on grammar and improve handwriting.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
Work on your handwriting, your words in the flow chart are not legible.
Before writing the issues, write the benefits of UBI.
You can give points like-
-will increase the purchasing power
-will reduce poverty and income inequality in society.
In the issues part, also mention that it can rise inflation.
Conclusion is good.
Need to work upon spellings.
Write in proper structure to get better marks.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Explain briefly the components of UBI.
Write some of he benefits of UBI, you can write-
-will increase the purchasing power
-will reduce poverty and income inequality in society.
You have explained the issues in implementation and the measures in a comprehensive manner.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing , you will succeed.
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Too good, I keep your answer as a benchmark to check mine. Keep up the great work & a small query if you don’t mind answering, how long have you been writing answers?
Hi NJ
Good introduction.
You have explained the issues in implementation and the measures in a comprehensive manner.
Work on space management, in this question, there was hardly any space left for conclusion, so write crisp and concise.
The content is good and well placed.
Overall a decent attempt.
Work on handwriting, avoid scribbling.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing , you will succeed.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
Before writing the challenge, write the benefits of UBI.
You can give points like-
-will increase the purchasing power
-will reduce poverty and income inequality in society.
You have covered the challenges in quite a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
Do not explain your flow chart in paragraphs, if there is need to write in points then do not make a flow chart.
You have explained the issues and measures in a decent manner.
You can give the examples from around the world who have tried the idea of UBI in one form or the other like Canada and Finland.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Sumona
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart is appreciable but try to make it little neat.
You have explained the issues and measures in a decent manner.
You can give the examples from around the world who have tried the idea of UBI in one form or the other like Canada and Finland.
Good conclusion.
Avoid spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Mehul
Need to rewrite your introduction, universal basic income is a regular, periodic cash payment delivered unconditionally to all citizens on an individual basis, without the requirement of work or willingness to work.
There is no need to write issues under two different headings, instead give one heading and write under different subheadings.
Give the examples from around the world who have tried the idea of UBI in one form or the other like Canada and Finland.
Conclusion is missing,conclude by mentioning the potential of UBI in addressing the problems faced by the other schemes and how it could help in the welfare of the people.
Work on handwriting, underline keywords.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Work hard.
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Hi Shubham
Good introduction.
Before writing the challenge, write the benefits of UBI.
You can give points like-
-will increase the purchasing power
-will reduce poverty and income inequality in society.
You have written only one issue.
Refer Chester’s answer for detailed issues.
Steps are decently explained.
Good conclusion.
Need to enrich your content, read comprehensively for it.
Work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Work hard, you will improve.
Yes @Parth Verma Sir, reading my first answer after 1 month of answer writing practice, I also feel that this answer is not upto the mark at all.
Do not get demotivated, keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Vinay
Good introduction.
You have explained the issues and measures in a decent manner.
You can give the examples from around the world who have tried the idea of UBI in one form or the other like Canada and Finland.
Good conclusion.
You have the hold over the content.
A decent attempt.
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Hi Sumona
Good introduction.
You have explained the issues and measures in a decent manner.
You can give the examples from around the world who have tried the idea of UBI in one form or the other like Canada and Finland.
Good conclusion.
You have the strong hold over the content, keep it up.
A decent attempt.
You have the potential of writing good answers, join our Mains Guidance Program for betterment and quality enrichment of your answers.
Thumbs up for handwriting.
Keep writing, you will succeed.