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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/atma- nirbhar-bharat-scheme- agriculture-narendra-modi- govt-covid-19-6491672/ - In the intro, briefly state India’s progress from ship-to-mouth country to self-sufficiency to the exporter.
- In the body, focus on the comparative advantage and mention the commodities we export and providing further incentives similar to what is given for rice and sugar to increase their production. Next, on import we spend most on the edible oil and answer to it lies in encouraging the cultivation of palm.
- Conclude by stating the potential in India to become the leading exporter of agri-produce.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
Before explaining how can we increase exports, focus on the comparative advantage and mention how to increase the commodities we export.
Then mention the reforms which we need for higher agri exports.
Some good points but need to add more comprehensive data . add points like we should focus on strengthening quality regimen in agriculture production system .
Various bodies like FSSAI and ICAR need to work in a coordinated manner to improve the quality of the entire food supply chain.
Good conclusion.
Use flow chart is appreciable.
Improve your handwriting, differentiate between ‘U’ and ‘R’..
Try to give a proper structure to your answer to get better marks.
Avoid using short forms .
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Taran
Lackluster introduction,briefly state India’s progress from ship-to-mouth country to self-sufficiency to the exporter.
First write about the current status of agri-exports in India.
Then write the shortcomings.
Instead of writing complete sentences , use headings and subheadings, it will save you words as well as your answer will be more presentable.
In the way forward you have written quite general points, write about the comprehensive “Agriculture Export Policy” aimed at doubling the agricultural exports and integrating Indian farmers and agricultural products with the global value chains.
The policies relating to Minimum Support Price will also have to be made WTO compatible.
Read comprehensively to enrich your content.
Good conclusion.
Work on structure.
Improve your basic grammar.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Shubham
Rephrase your introduction.
First mention the current status of agri-exports in India, then explain briefly about the challenges, then write the way forward.
Follow a proper structure, do not come directly to the way forward,
Lack of content.
In the way forward you have written quite general points, write about the comprehensive “Agriculture Export Policy” aimed at doubling the agricultural exports and integrating Indian farmers and agricultural products with the global value chains.
The policies relating to Minimum Support Price will also have to be made WTO compatible.
Read comprehensively to enrich your content.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using short forms like govt etc.
Work on handwriting and basic grammar.
Try to add cover aspects to fetch better marks.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have explained the current status of agri-exports in a decent manner.
Write about the challenges then suggest the strategy.
Some good points in the suggested strategy but read mentor’s comment for it, add points like encouraging the cultivation of palm, ‘Agriculture Export Policy’aimed at doubling the agricultural exports and integrating Indian farmers and agricultural products with the global value chains.
Good conclusion.
Avoid scribbling while writing.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep it up !
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Hi NJ
Content is there but need to rephrase your introduction,
In the reasons part, make the flow chart neat, it is looking like jumbled.
Suggested strategy is explained in a comprehensive manner, keep it up,
Manage your writing space , so that you can write the conclusion in a proper manner.
Content is diverse.
Structure of the answer is decent.
Keep it up.
You have the potential of writing good answers, keep writing !
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
Strategy of expansion is well explained.
In the way forward,you can add some more points like various bodies like FSSAI and ICAR need to work in a coordinated manner to improve the quality of the entire food supply chain.
Good conclusion.
Content is good and diverse.
Structure of the answer is decent.
Work on basic grammar as some of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Overall a good attempt.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing !
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Hi Unnati
Write proper introduction.
Before writing the measures, write about the current status of agri-exports in India,focus on the comparative advantage and mention the commodities we export and providing further incentives similar to what is given for rice and sugar to increase their production.
Write the challenges.
Then suggest the strategy to improve.
Follow a proper structure to fetch better marks.
Suggested strategy is well explained .
Good conclusion.
Content is decent.
Work on structure of the answer.
Keep writing !
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Hi Chester
Lackluster introduction, in this briefly state India’s progress from ship-to-mouth country to self-sufficiency to the exporter.
Work on headings , give small headings.
Focus on the comparative advantage and mention how to increase the commodities we export.
In the way forward you have written quite general points, write about integrating Indian farmers and agricultural products with the global value chains. Mention that the policies relating to Minimum Support Price will also have to be made WTO compatible.
Read comprehensively to enrich your content.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Work on basic grammar as well.
Keep writing,you will improve.