Mentor’s comment-
- In introduction briefly explain who Tanaaji Malusare was.
- In the body explain about him. Then discuss the significant contributions to Battle of Singhagad. Highlight the outcomes of the battle.
- Conclude with importance of such warriors in history.
Please review sir
Hi Pooja
Good introduction.
Causes and outcomes are discussed in a decent manner.
Good conclusion.
Leave some space between the paragraphs.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Avoid using short forms.
A decent attempt.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Divya
Good introduction.
Content wise good attempt.
Thumbs up for the structure.
Language is simple and lucid.
A good attempt.
Keep working hard.