Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction you can start by defining who constitute transgender in the society.
- In the body explain the term transgender. Explain the
underlying reasons for ill attitude of general people towards them. Suggest solutions to change the attitude, comment on the action that needs to be taken to induce the right attitude in public,
government and other institutions. - Conclude with way ahead.
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Hi Samiksha
Good introduction.
Reasons for ill attitude are explained well but write some prejudices also like- Being The Parent of a Transgender Child Is Shameful.
In the remedies part, you have written the behavioural changes, write some legal remedies also like stringent criminal and disciplinary action must be taken against the people who commits
violence against Transgender.
Try to cover different aspects to get better marks.
Good conclusion.
Work on presentation.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Sneha
Good introduction.
Reasons for ill attitude are explained well but mention some prejudices also like- Being The Parent of a Transgender child Is shameful.
Briefly explain the impact of this ill attitude, how it is affecting the society .
Try to cover different aspects to get better marks.
Suggested strategy is well explained.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing !