Mentor’s comment-

• In the introduction you can start by defining who constitute transgender in the society. The term “transgender” refers to
  a broad range of social identities and gender presentations.
• In the body explain the underlying reasons for ill attitude of general people towards them. Suggest solutions to change the attitude, comment on the action that needs to be taken to induce the right attitude in public, government and other institutions.
• Conclude with way ahead.