11th January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

Explain the main features of Montagu-Chelmsford reforms? How far did they implement the policy of administrative devolution? (200 W/12 ½ M)

Question 2)

Today, it feels that it is the Judiciary alone that is shouldering the responsibility of deepening democracy and protecting social freedoms. Comment. (15 Marks)

Question 3)

What do you understand by Net neutrality? Critically comment on TRAI’s recent recommendations on net neutrality? (200 W/12 ½ M)

Question 4)

Ethics Case Study: You are posted as a senior officer in forest department. Your office deals with granting clearances to new projects. Your son has recently started a new project where he wants to set up a new factory in a forest area. This would involve clearing some area of district through which forest passes. The government has presently been not giving clearances to such projects as it has been emphasizing on forest conservation. Your son asks you to get the clearances done from your department. You have always been an upright officer and have not taken any benefit of the post held by you. However, this project is important for your son as you want him to get settled. Will you use your authority to get the project cleared? What are the ethical conflicts that arise in the case? What are the options that are available to you? Discuss them with their merits and demerits. (150 W/ 10 M)

 

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lekha_27
3 years ago

CDTEST22496 Ans 3
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Pritam Kumar
3 years ago
Reply to  lekha_27

Hi Lekha,
-Ideas mentioned in answer are good…however, the answer lack logical arrangement of ideas…
-Points under benefits seems general…talk about various recommendations given by TRAI rather than showing benefits of net neutrality…
Incorporate points like…equal treatment irrespective of content, penalty of non following of TRAI’s order which is from Rs. 50,000 to 5 Lakh, No high speed data lanes, Also bar on free distribution of services by any means etc…
Now counter points as criticisms…here some of the points mentioned by you are correct…
-Points of conclusion could have been much better…

Overall, need to be more specific on content…structure wise the answer is okay…

Keep writing will improve for sure…

Marks awarded: 4.5/12.5

Refer our model answer for better clarity…

lekha_27
3 years ago

CDTEST22496 Ans 2
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Pritam Kumar
3 years ago
Reply to  lekha_27

Hi Lekha,
-Good answer…points are well presented…
-However, First 3-4 points on 2nd page need completion…as this convey only half idea…

The rest is good and nicely attempted…keep it up..keep writing…
Marks awarded: 7/15

lekha_27
3 years ago

CDTEST22496 Ans 1
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Pritam Kumar
3 years ago
Reply to  lekha_27

Hi Lekha,
-There is no introduction in your answer…
-However, the points mentioned are good and well analyzed…good approach and nicely presented…
-Also, pay attention to the word limit…
Nice attempt overall, keep writing…

Marks awarded: 6/12.5

AB
AB
3 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
3 years ago
Reply to  AB

Hi AB,

Net Neutrality
-Poor introduction…You have not explained clearly what exactly is net neutrality…though example of Airtel is okay…
-Avoid using short-form of the word…like govt.
-The rest of the points are very good and precisely written…nice approach…
Keep writing…just need to improve the intro, the rest is good…

Marks awarded: 7/12.5

dhritiman das
dhritiman das
3 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
3 years ago
Reply to  dhritiman das

Hi Dhritiman,
-Introduction does not convey clear picture…Your intro talks about pull factors…rather than push factors…Net neutrality require all ISPs to treat all data services equal irrespective of its content…
-Points are not at par with what the question is asking…You need to mention the recommendations put by TRAI regarding use of bandwith…and then criticise these recommendations…

Keep writing…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…

dhritiman das
dhritiman das
3 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
3 years ago
Reply to  dhritiman das

Hi Dhritiman,
-The structure of the answer is poor…there is no introduction…
-Points seems incomplete…doesn’t convey complete picture…bring clarity…elaborate more…remember individual points should always be complete in itself…
-Conclusion is absent…
-Overall, average attempt…need to have more focus on content/idea completion as well as presentation…Focus on your handwriting…
Keep writing…will improve for sure…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…