28th November 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

Buddhism as a religion has impacted so deep and affected philosophy and art of adaptive country that it penetrated the entire fabric of Chinese Culture. Explain. (200 W)

Question 2)

Mental illness is a critical health concern in India which also faces social stigma. In context of this analyze the importance of New Mental Health Care Act which came into force in July 2018. Also discuss challenges of mental health care system in the country. (200 W)

Question 3)

What is contract farming? Critically analyze the features of the draft “Model Contract Farming Act – 2018”. (150 W)

Question 4)

How would you classify the conscience? Suppose an old man has a pension claim before a civil servant and according to law it is a doubtful claim, what he should do and why? (150 W/ 10 M)

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    Hi Imgroot,
    -Answer is very good…well written ideas and points are very precise…
    -Very good…well done…keep it up…
    Marks awarded: 7.5/12.5

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    Hi Imgroot, -Very good introduction…with good ideas…however, we can also add the definition of Mental Illness to it…that will make the introduction a perfect one…though the points mentioned by you is also good…and well arranged… -Points under new mental health care Act are good…though two very important points have been absent from here…first Insurance cover to mentally ill persons…decriminalization of suicide attempt by mentally ill persons…(the second one you have mentioned in importance)… -Also there are other points which seems important…like free treatment to below poverty line population, community based treatment, right to confidentiality etc…etc… -Points under challenges need justification…need… Read more »

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    CDTEST20453 Ans no2 For the first Time in India mental healthcare is now a justiciable right as per MHCA 2017.As per MNHS survey of India india spends less than 1% of its budget on mental health where in India we have around 150 million people need mental health care about 92% dont have any access to any form of mental health care. The various issues that people faces are Stigma that related to society due to which most people keep on ignoring mental health issues which also becomes a cause of suicide in somecases There are very less number of… Read more »

    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Puru, -First of all there is suggestion that please write on sheet of paper and upload. Writing on paper will benefit you most… -While using Abbreviations for words, please ensure that you must have mentioned it full form earlier…You have not mentioned what is MHCA, MNHS…though its known but it need to be explained by you… -Also introduction is poor…the question aspires for New Mental Health Care Act and its analysis…your introduction is more in terms of budget…and availability…Need more focus on question…(Its not completely wrong…but intro can more be associated question or topic)…You can talk that they also… Read more »

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    Hi Shefali, -Introduction can be made more precise…and focused towards question…first line seem good…in the next line you would have mentioned about social stigma…ignorance which further adds to vulnerability… -Also, the connectivity required between first two paragraphs… -Under the provisions…points seems very general…and you missed two important points here…first – Insurance cover to mentally ill persons…2nd, decriminalization of suicide attempt by mentally ill persons….also right to confidentiality and community based treatment… -Under challenges also…add some points…Economic Burden, treatment gap, human right violation etc… -Conclusion should also laud the Act and its provision….apart from what you have mentioned…. Overall, answer is… Read more »

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    CDTEST20453 Ans1 Contract farming is basically a practice where there is already a contract being established between the farmer and companies to sell the farm produce at a specified date at a specified price.To potect farmers from price risk and provide incentive to buyer the agriculture ministry has drafted model contract farming act that states can adopt as per there needs Helps ingrate farmers produce with food processing units that will help in better price realisation reduce post harvest loss The basic aim of the act is to transfer the risk associated with price unpredictability from the farmers to buyers,… Read more »

    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Puru,
    You made discussion too lengthy…its almost 330 words…
    -The ideas in Introduction seems good…
    -Under provision…also add…it also covers dairy, poultry and live stock farming…
    -The rest of the points are good and well arranged…but need to sync adhering to the word limit…

    Overall, good attempt…focused towards question and nice approach…keep it up…
    Marks awarded: 6/10

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Madhav,
    -Good introduction….
    -Features of the Act is good…however try to bring those features which are more important…like you missed some of the important points…Out of APMC control, Dispute settlement system at the lower level etc…etc…
    There are only 4 criticisms of points…but criticism is the prime demand of the question…try to bring more criticisms…
    -Conclusion could have been more comprehensive…with wider views…

    Overall , good attempt…keep practicing…will improve for sure…

    Marks awarded: 4.5/10

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Kapiushon,
    -Introduction seems okay….though it can be made more comprehensive…
    -Provisions mentioned are good…almost covered the important points…though point 1 and 2 need justification…(Explain)…
    -Under challenges…1st point…why police and judges need to be sensitize…bring clarity and justification…seems incomplete…
    -You are not answering the 2nd part of the question…its about the challenges of mental health care system at present…and not about the implementation of new Act….focus on the question…
    -Ideas in conclusion is good…

    Overall, good attempt…need more focus towards question…keep writing…

    Marks awarded: 5/12.5
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Shefali,
    -Introduction seems good…
    -Under salient features…point b)…its not boundation….farmers can avail the inputs as per their own choice…Companies are not bound to provide…rather they can ensure about the quality…
    -Also add that this Act also covers Dairy, poultry and livestock farming…
    -Agriculture is under state list of Indian Constitution…not state bill…
    –There are general points under “some problems”…(refer our model answer for more specific points)
    -Conclusion is okay as per the content mentioned by you…

    -Overall, good attempt…however, more focus needed on criticisms…
    Keep writing…will improve for sure…

    Marks awarded: 4.5/10

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    Hi Akshat, -Poor introduction…What do you mean be Brahmanical supremacy????…its not adequate way to talk….Introduction should talk about the spread of Buddhism in China post Han period and contribution of rulers and other imminent persons in spreading…. -There is no linkages among ideas and points… -Points are too general and conveys incomplete meaning…clarity in points needed… -Again there is new reason in conclusion….reason can not be the conclusion here… Overall, below average answer…You seems to be restricting yourself from multiple points…. Suggestion: Introduction should give a general idea about the topic…the topic here is spread of Buddhism in China… Next… Read more »

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    Hi Akshat, -Poor introduction again…Your introduction shows that the Act has been brought to change the behaviour of human towards mentally ill persons…(Narrowing approach)…don’t restrict your thought… -Some of the points under features are good…but need to explain with relevant points….also some points are missed…like insurance cover, free treatment for BPL families, consent of the patient etc… -Poor points in challenges…also points are incomplete… -Overall, average approach…Keep practicing…will improve for sure… Suggestion: Read the topic and associated references before attempting for writing…Jot down the points which are important and which you are going to include… check and recheck after writing… Read more »

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    Hi Akshat, -Poor introduction again…Explain the complete fact…why are you restricting yourself…It’s not only agreement to sell rather pre agreement in production and quality production as well…(refer our model answer)… -Explain the flow chart (what is mentioned in contract farming) in paragraph… -APMC is not bad or corrupt…rather delay in process due to various factors hinders fast delivery…criticism of something is good to an extent which should not be hooked and coocked (false) criticism… -There is no criticism of the points as asked in question…demand of the question is ignored… Overall, below average answer… Keep writing…will improve for sure… Refer… Read more »

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    Hi Akshat,
    -Introduction is good…however, the classification of conscience is missing…
    -As per the explanation what you have brought…it shows strictness in following the rules rather than conscience…there is no evidence as well like example…
    -Very general answer…lack in 360 degree coverage and confined with limited points…

    Though good…keep writing…will improve for sure…
    Marks awarded: 3.5/10

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Kapiushon,
    -Good introduction…
    -Features of the Act is good and well presented…
    -There are only two criticism…though the demand of the question is only criticism…(need more focus on question)…
    -Ideas in conclusion is very good…
    Overall, average answer due to less focus on demand of the question…bring more criticisms…criticise even the points mentioned under features…
    Though good attempt…keep practicing…will improve for sure…
    Keep writing…
    Marks awarded: 3/10

    Refer our model answer for better clarity….

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Kapiushon, -Very impressive introduction… -The stand taken by you for following the Rule of Law is not in-conformity…following RoL strictly will kill conscience… Conscience has its own place and is ofcourse bigger than the law… -Also there is no classification of conscience mentioned (as demanded by question…) -Here sympathy should work as the ground of conscience… The officer should try to investigate the matter in details and ask other officials to cooperate with the old person so as the person should not get harassed. If found genuine by investigation…the old person should be given pension and if not genuine… Read more »