7th December 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

India is lagging behind in global demand of education and employability. Discuss India’s state of education sector and suggest necessary reforms needed. (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 2)

What do you understand by Fugitive Economic Offender? Recently cabinet has approved Fugitive Economic Offenders Bill to be tabled in the Parliament. Discuss the need for this Bill and concerns associated with it? (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 3)

The policies of the Pre-Liberalization era are responsible for jobless growth phenomenon that we are witnessing since the start of liberalization in 1991? Discuss (250 W/15 M)

Question 4)

Ethics Case Study: India is facing the burning issue of cow protectionism which is also witnessed by many self-appointed “cow protectors” who have committed brutal attacks against Muslims and Dalits over rumors that they sold, bought, or killed cows for beef. You are a senior investigation officer and from source you got to know that a social activist involved in cow protection is smuggling cows in lure of money. While investigating you found that he is in contact with various slaughtering houses where he used to supply cows. He is a reputed activist and considered responsible and honest by other social activists which debars him from being doubted by others of any malpractices. He used to take advantages of this trust of masses on him and on the backdrop of it, he used to carry (transport) cows without any security problems. No one from the security was questioning him for such movement due to his reputation. 1. There is a sure possibility of being fire up communal violence upon his arrest which may trigger law and order problems everywhere. How will you control this situation? 2. Considering the entire situation, what course of action do you think is possible? Justify your actions with suitable measures. (250 W / 15 M)

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  • 29 Replies to “7th December 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement”

      1. Hi Imgroot,
        -Answer is very good and well written…
        -Introduction seems to be okay…points are precisely written and arranged…
        -Points under reforms needed are also good…
        -However, conclusion is absent…which also holds equal importance…Please incorporate conclusion also…

        Overall, very good attempt…Keep writing…
        Marks awarded: 6/10

      1. Hi Anita,
        Please work on your handwriting…write the letters of the words properly so that it should not pose any difficulty in reading…
        -Presentation is very poor…this is not the way we answer ethics case study…
        -There is no introduction…you directly started with the action…also you have used 1st person involving yourself…use third person…
        -Ideas are also poor…as it has been already mentioned in question that he is a person of repute…even asking him directly may infuse violence…so need to think in wider sense…

        You need to have the framework clarity as well as to incorporate wider ideas in your answer…

        Refer our model answer for better clarity…

      1. Hi Dhritiman,
        -Ideas in introduction is good…however, it needs more clarity…
        -The ideas in first part seems okay…however, the ideas in 2nd part is very general…the concern mentioned is very general…
        -The justification here should be provided with the existing provisions of the bill…like confiscating property, attachment of property, special court, disentitlement of persons from any civil claims etc…

        Under concern…An absolute ban is contrary to the basic tenets of justice and fair play, besides being in violation of the Indian Constitution…Violates principle of innocent unless proven guilty…not easy to find buyers etc….etc….

        Also bring conclusion…

        Overall, attempt is good..need to bring more specific ideas rather than the general one…keep writing…will improve for sure…

        Marks awarded: 4.5/15

        Refer our model answer for better clarity…

      1. Hi Drhitiman,
        -Please enumerate which question’s answer you are writing…
        -Please avoid too much highlighting or underlining of lines…
        -Introductory line is poor…
        -points are good and well written…good arrangement of ideas…with good conclusion as well…
        -Overall, good attempt…nice approach…keep it up…keep writing…
        Marks awarded: 7/15

      1. Hi Shefali,
        -The ideas in introduction is good…rather very good…but to make them more attractive logical arrangement needed…first talk about the global demand which you have mentioned in 2nd para…then bring India’s status…as in 1st para…
        -Points under issues related to Indian education is okay…however, some important points have been missed…like poor infrastructure, teacher pupil ratio, teacher’s ability especially in government schools, also social factor like higher dropout due to poverty and unemployment to parents, dropout specially among girls etc…etc…
        -However, the ideas under reforms are more like philosophical one…we can suggest of incorporating ICT in education on the line of modern demand..[point e) is good one]…more focus on practicality rather than theory, building infrastructure especially for girls education, influencing poor strata to send their children to school, incentives like mid day meal, ssa, etc…etc…

        -Good conclusion…
        Overall, good attempt…but don’t be more of generalist…a bit specificity in point is needed…think with more wider views…

        Keep writing will improve for sure…
        Marks awarded: 5/10

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