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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ mohsen-fakhrizadeh-iranian- nuclear-scientist- assassination-india-middle- east-relations-7074505/ - In the intro, mention the rising isolation of Iran and rivalry with other Arab countries.
- In the body, discuss the rising tree trends- isolation of Iran and internal division in Iran, the transformation of relations Arab countries with Israel, the rising rivalry between Arab countries and Tukey, all of these changes have consequences for India, Pakistan and Bangladesh.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for seizing the opportunities presented by the geopolitical churn in the Middle East.
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Name: Prashant
Email: prashant.kumar@alumni.iitd.ac.in
Hi Prashant
Good introduction.
You have good command over content, keep enriching it.
Need to work on space management.
Structure is good.
Your subheading ‘standing and image’ is not conveying anything, give simple subheadings.
Good conclusion.
Keep workinng hard.
divyaloyola13@gmail.com
Hi Divya
You can also start your answer by mentioning the rising isolation of Iran and rivalry with other Arab countries.
Avoid spelling mistakes.
Content is good .
Goos structure.
Try to write in straight lines.
Thumbs up for the conclusion.
Keep working hard.