Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction you can explain that industrial locations are complex in nature.
- In the body you can discuss the non-geographical factors in detail – Capital investment, Availability of loans, Investment
climate, Government policies/regulations, Influence of pressure groups etc.
You can quote relevant examples from India and across the world to justify the answer. - Conclude that it is rarely possible to find all these factors available at one place, so what should be the best way to handle the problem.
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Hi Akash
Lackluster introduction,explain that industrial locations are complex in nature.
Lack of content is there in your answer.
In the non-geographical factors write the government policies,industrial inertia,Role of banking facilities, impact of political and economic situation of the country.
Also mention the possibilities of future expansion of the industries.
Concluding remarks are good.
Add dimensions to your answer to fetch better marks.
Work on handwriting, write little big to make it legible.
Keep writing !
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Hi Taran
Content is good in the introduction but rephrase it.
In the non-geographical factors some good points are there, but also write aboout the government policies,industrial inertia,Role of banking facilities, impact of political and economic situation of the country.
Also mention the possibilities of future expansion of the industries.
Brainstorm before writing.
There is nothing ‘rarely impossible’ , work on writing language.
Grammatical errors are there , work on it.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Dakshina
In the introduction, first explain briefly what industry is, then write about the location of industries.
Work on writing language, for example, It is ‘Initial years after independence’ and instead of using term Bania, write business community or traders.
Also mention the importance of research facilities in the expansion of industries.
Explain briefly how the political and economic situation impact the industries.
Work on content,
Improve handwriting .
Work on basic grammar.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
Write according to the demand of the question.
Write about the non-geographical factors only , not all the factors.
Use of diagrams is appreciable.
Some good points but need to add more like the role of banking facilities, impact of political and economic situation on the location of industries etc.
Think various perspectives to fetch better marks.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting.
Keep working hard !
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
First mention briefly about the factors that influence the location of industries then come to non-geographical factors.
You have covered quite diverse factors, keep it up.
Content is good and well placed.
In the way forward, also write about the research facilities.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing.
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Hi Vishesh
Good introduction.
You have explained the non-geographical factors in a decent manner, points are diverse !
Good conclusion.
Work on spellings and basic grammar.
Improve handwriting to get better marks.
Overall a decent attempt.
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Hi NJ
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart is appreciable but try to make it little neat.
Giving the examples of various nations is a good strategy, it shows you have comprehensive knowledge about the topic.
After explaining the non-geographical factors, write briefly the way forward.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
Climate factor is a geographical factor , brainstorm before writing.
You have mentioned all the factors , the question is demanding only the non-geographical ones.
For example write about the role of banking facilities,impact of political situation,insurance etc.
Conclusion is good but write according to the demand of the question.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Aastha
Good introduction.
You have explained the non-geographical factors of different type of industries, appreciable.
It shows you have hold over the content and you know how to present it.
Keep it up.
Write some way forward also.
For example what can be done to improve and expand our industries.
Good conclusion.
A decent attempt.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing .
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Hi Teja
Good introduction.
You have explained the non-geographical factors in a decent manner.
Give the examples of various nations also.
Write some way forward also.
For example what can be done to improve and expand our industries.
Good conclusion.
Scan properly.
Underline keywords to convince examiner easily.
Overall a good attempt.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing !