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- Briefly write about the petroleum and its reserves around the world.
- With the help of a map, mention the region wise distribution of petroleum reserves in the world.
- Conclude by highlighting the current situation of petroleum exploration.
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Chandan
Although your concept is fine, value addition by mentioning facts and figures need to be done.
Introduction is fine, you could mention that crude petroleum occurs in sedimentary rocks of the tertiary period.
Next you could mention the % wise distribution of petroleum reserves across regions- Middle East(66%), E. Europe &Russia (5%), central and South America (9%), North America (5%), Africa(7%), Asia and Oceania(4%).
Then region wise, you could add some examples of important oilfields- Al Ghawar, Saffaniyah in Saudi Arabia, Al Burqan, Al Rumaylah in Kuwait and Iraq, Western Siberia, Kamchatka Peninsula, Sakhalin island in Russia, Nigeria, Angola, Gabon in Africa, Permian Basin in USA, Terra Nova, Hibernia in Canada, Maracaibo basin in Venezuela etc
Briefly, India’s oil reserves such as Mumbai High, Ankleshwar in Gujarat and Digboi, Naharkatiya in Assam could also be mentioned.
Conclusion is fine.
Read more about the topic, keep practicing. 🙂
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Introduction is fine, but the answer is short on content.
You have written the same thing first in points, and then shown it on the map. You could just make the map after intro and show regionwise distribution.
Next, a bit of detail needs to be added by mentioning important regions where oil reserves are found- Al Ghawar, Saffaniyah in Saudi Arabia, Al Burqan, Al Rumaylah in Kuwait and Iraq, Western Siberia, Kamchatka Peninsula, Sakhalin island in Russia, Nigeria, Angola, Gabon in Africa, Permian Basin in USA, Terra Nova, Hibernia in Canada, Maracaibo basin in Venezuela etc
Briefly, India’s oil reserves such as Mumbai High, Ankleshwar in Gujarat and Digboi, Naharkatiya in Assam could also be mentioned.
A conclusion could be added emphasizing on the unequal distribution of reserves.
Keep practicing, read a bit more about the topic. 🙂
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Payal
Good attempt. Introduction is good, the map is also fine. In the map itself you could show the broad region wise distribution – Middle East(66%), E. Europe &Russia (5%), central and South America (9%), North America (5%), Africa(7%), Asia and Oceania(4%).
Mention of major oil fields is good. You could arrange them continent wise for better presentation. Some important ones like Sakhalin island, Kamchatka peninsula in Russia, Maracaibo basin of Venezuela, Al Burqan, Al Rumaylah in Kuwait and Iraq also be added. Briefly, India’s oil reserves such as Mumbai High, Ankleshwar in Gujarat and Digboi, Naharkatiya in Assam could also be mentioned.
Conclusion part is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Sushant
Decent attempt, broadly you have covered the crux of the answer but value addition could be done by mentioning facts and figures.
Introduction is fine, good that you have drawn the world map. In the map itself you could show the broad region wise distribution – Middle East(66%), E. Europe &Russia (5%), central and South America (9%), North America (5%), Africa(7%), Asia and Oceania(4%).
Points in explaining the distribution in next part are fine, you could add important examples where oil reserves are found in respective points – Al Ghawar, Saffaniyah in Saudi Arabia, Al Burqan, Al Rumaylah in Kuwait and Iraq, Western Siberia, Kamchatka Peninsula, Sakhalin island in Russia, Nigeria, Angola, Gabon in Africa, Permian Basin in USA, Terra Nova, Hibernia in Canada, Maracaibo basin in Venezuela etc
Briefly, India’s oil reserves such as Mumbai High, Ankleshwar in Gujarat and Digboi, Naharkatiya in Assam could also be mentioned.
Conclusion part is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂