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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/g7- leaders-meet-germany-russia- ukraine-war-coronavirus- climate-change-7997117/ - In the intro, mention the recently concluded G7 meet and India’s participation as an observer.
- In the body, mention that the participation of key economies of G20 in the G7 meet as observers points to the increasing influence of these economies. In the next part mention that India’s participation serves to advance its foreign and security policy objectives. Also mention that G7 is still a powerful grouping, with seven of its members in the top 10 economies of the world, three of them permanent members of the UNSC. Also, mention the strong language adopted against China in the G7 final communique on China’s expansive maritime claims.
- Conclude by mentioning that India’s participation points to India’s increasing clout and a change from rule-taker to rule-shaper.
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Saurabh
Nice attempt, you have written well. Most themes are covered.
Introduction is good, importance of G7 for India is also well articulated. You could also mention that 7 members are in the top 10 economies of the world; 3 members are the permanent members of the UNSC; home to some of the best emerging technologies.
Significance and conclusion are aslo fine.
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Chandan
Introduction is fine, next divide the subheadings into importance of G7 for India and significance of India’s participation because that is what is asked.
Anyways, in impacts you have written quite generic points which can be said to be true for any grouping.
In importance, you could mention that 7 members are in the top 10 economies of the world; 3 members are the permanent members of the UNSC; home to some of the best emerging technologies. Next you could mention importance with respect to environment, trade, post-covid recovery etc.
In 2nd part some points are fine- meetings on the sidelines, policy impact(you can mention foreign and security here) etc.
However, mention some important points like – no global problem can be seriously tackled without involvement of India- signing of “Resilient Democracies Statement” to promote a rules-based international order and “Joining Forces to Accelerate Clean and Just Transition towards Climate Neutrality”, wherein India, is doing everything in its power to be part of the solution including requesting the Western countries to invest heavily in India’s renewable energy market. India can also play some role in improving food security, pursuing concerted efforts to overcome the Covid-19 pandemic, fighting corruption, protecting freedom of expression, both online and offline, and ensuring an open and secure internet.Further common security threats such as Chinese aggression in South China Sea, stance on Russia-Ukraine war could be handled better.
Conclusion is fine, further it can be mentioned that this is a opportunity for India to make the full transition from being a rule-taker to a rule-shaper.
You are lacking on the content part in most answers, although you mention some related points still a lot is left out. One way to improve on that could be to first go through the articles attached once, then try to write your answer atleast for some days. Also you can read some other answers, to get the difference.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Introduction is fine, data under importance should be updated, 10% of the world’s population, 31% of global GDP.. Also, you could mention that 7 members are in the top 10 economies of the world; 3 members are the permanent members of the UNSC; home to some of the best emerging technologies.
In next part, points are fine. However, you could substantiate them with the developments in the recent summit- for example when talking about Chinese aggression call on China to press Russia to withdraw troops from Ukraine; to respect universal human rights and fundamental freedoms in both Tibet and Xinjiang etc could be mentioned. Importance with regard to tackling environmental change and post-pandemic recovery could be added.
In significance,you can mention that no global problem can be seriously tackled without involvement of India- signing of “Resilient Democracies Statement” to promote a rules-based international order and “Joining Forces to Accelerate Clean and Just Transition towards Climate Neutrality”,. India can also play some role in improving food security, pursuing concerted efforts to overcome the Covid-19 pandemic, fighting corruption, protecting freedom of expression, both online and offline, and ensuring an open and secure internet. The opportunity the summit provides for bilateral meetings could also be mentioned.
Conclusion is fine.
This is a 15 marker, so a bit elaboration is required in the points, using examples, current affairs is always good. Also ideal length of such answers should be around 3 pages. You could go through the article attached above to improve the content.
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This is a 15 marker, content is lesser than ideal. Plus, substantiate your points with data, facts, events etc otherwise the answer becomes quite generic.
Introduction is fine, in importance you have mentioned some good points, but you could add that G7 comprises 10% of the world’s population, 31% of global GDP.. Also, you could mention that 7 members are in the top 10 economies of the world; 3 members are the permanent members of the UNSC; home to some of the best emerging technologies.
When you talk about Chinese agression mention that the grouping called on China to press Russia to withdraw troops from Ukraine; to respect universal human rights and fundamental freedoms in both Tibet and Xinjiang etc
In significance, you could mention that no global problem can be seriously tackled without involvement of India- signing of “Resilient Democracies Statement” to promote a rules-based international order and “Joining Forces to Accelerate Clean and Just Transition towards Climate Neutrality”. India can also play some role in improving food security, pursuing concerted efforts to overcome the Covid-19 pandemic, fighting corruption, protecting freedom of expression, both online and offline, and ensuring an open and secure internet.
Gaining respect and persuasion etc can be added as filler points, the main content in IR answers should include the developments that are taking place otherwise it shows a lack of awareness.
Go through the article attached above. Keep practicing. 🙂