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- https://indianexpress.com/article/opinion/columns/repealing-afspa-will-not-weaken-only-strengthen-constitution-7663144/
- In the intro, mention recent kiling of civilians in Nagaland in a security operation.
- In the body, mention issues such as violation of rights of the citizens, excessive powers, lack of accountability mechanism, against federalism, against the professionalism of army etc.
- In the suggestions mention repeal of the law and how it can help strengthen the country.
- Conclude by mentioning review of the law and its repeal.
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Intro can be better, mention about the recent Nagaland issue..also mention what are the powers under AFSPA broadly before coming to issues..search, seizure, arrest, the right to shoot to kill and conduct operations etc
Issues mentioned are fine, you are using too many random words like lately, standardization etc..it makes things a bit vague..address the exact point..you can mention issue of accountability, federalism, against professionalism of army etc in issues. Other points are good.
Constitutional part is also fine, after that mention a way forward..you can suggest repeal of the law..mention that Justice B.P. Jeevan Reddy committee had suggested repeal and amending relevant provisions of UAPA, insurgency has reduced in recent times etc. Try to mention relevant committees, SC judgements etc in GS2 answers.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Rohit
Intro is fine, if you link it with current affairs it will be better. (Nagaland issue).
Further, you are using terms like ‘ enormous powers’, ‘certain rights’, ‘huge powers’ etc. That shows lack of content, you can mention a bit on what powers(search, seizure, arrest, the right to shoot to kill and conduct operations), which rights(article 19,21 etc)..it will be better.
Other points are fine in issues.
Suggestions are also good, try to mention some committee name, SC judgement etc in GS2 answers, here you can mention about Justice B.P. Jeevan Reddy committee which had suggested repeal and amending relevant provisions of UAPA, insurgency has reduced in recent times can also be mentioned.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Bhanu
Nice attempt.
Introduction is fine, good that you have linked it with current issue.
You have mentioned ‘great power’, instead mention broadly what are the powers- search, seizure, arrest, the right to shoot to kill and conduct operations.
Issues mentioned are fine, use of table is good.
Next part is also fine, you can mention Justice B.P. Jeevan Reddy committee which had suggested repeal and amending relevant provisions of UAPA, insurgency has reduced in recent times etc in arguments in favour..mentioning some official sources will give you some bonus points.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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