Q.4 Examine the role played by ethics in private and public relationships.

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Introduction: Define Ethics and specific examples of the private and public sphere

Body:

Talk about how ethics influences private relations with examples.

Talk about how ethics influences Public relations with examples.

Conclude with what steps can be taken in both sphere to strengthen ethics.

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aarti bhimani
aarti bhimani
22 days ago

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5 days ago
Reply to  aarti bhimani

Aarti

Introduction is good.
In next part, about public relationships, try to make it more diverse- mention some qualities required (Nolan principles), ethics in administration, need to avoid conflict of interest etc
Mention some examples for better impact.
In next part, about private relationships, you can differentiate points on basis of family, friends etc and mention some ethical virtues required for a healthy private relationships.
Way forward and conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂

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k.s.nandhini
k.s.nandhini
21 days ago

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Reply to  k.s.nandhini

Nandhini

Good attempt.
Introduction is fine.
Both parts are addressed well. Use examples in each part to substantiate your points.
Conflict of interest part is also good, you can keep it a bit concise.
Try to mention a way forward and concluding statement.
Keep writing. 🙂

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