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- In the introduction briefly define AMOC.
- In the body first explain what the Atlantic Meridional Overturning Circulation is. Then discuss the concept in detail, use facts from the article and detail upon how it affects the Indian Ocean and vice-versa.
- Conclude with significance of understanding such phenomena’s for their applications in understanding changing whether patterns.
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Hi Somasis
Good introduction.
Thumbs up for the map diagram.
Refrain from monotony, use headings and subheadings i.
For example, you can give heading here -Link between Atlantic Meridional Overturning Circulation (AMOC) and the Indian Ocean
You have good hold over content but work on presentation also.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Divya
Good introduction.
In the relation, you can also write that this saltier water in the Atlantic, as it comes north via AMOC, will get cold much quicker than usual and sink faster.The above process would act as a jump start for AMOC, intensifying the circulation.
Content wise good attempt.
Thumbs up for the diagram.
Good conclusion.
Underline keywords.
Keep working hard .
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Hi Vinay
Your answer is well started.
AMOC working has been decently explained.
In these type of geography questions, try to make a map diagram to substantiate your content.
You have discussed the relation between AMOC and Indian ocean warming in a good way, keep it up.
Good conclusion.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing !