10th January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

The treaty of versailles was mainly an armistice for 20 years.” Comment. (200 W/ 12½ M)

Question 2)

Critically analyze the Aadhar and Other Laws (Amendment) Bill – 2018 which recently got passed in Lok Sabha. Do you think it’s a renewed attack on privacy? (200 W/ 12½ M)

Question 3)

A major challenge today is to develop low-input, high-output agriculture. This cannot be achieved without technology. Can GM crops help in this regard? Critically discuss. (200 W/ 12½ M)

Question 4)

‘When you are in doubt whether an action is good or bad, abstain from it’. – (‘Zoroaster’). What does this mean to you in present context? (150 W/ 10 M)

 

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ANUBHAW MISHRA
ANUBHAW MISHRA
19 Feb, 2019

PRITAM SIR * NOT CHECKED *


    ANUBHAW MISHRA
    ANUBHAW MISHRA
    19 Feb, 2019

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      Pritam Kumar
      19 Feb, 2019

      Hi Anubhaw,
      -Introductory lines seem to be good but you have brought very few reasons for low output that too are very general…we need to mention more specific points in first part of answer.

      -The following points can be helpful: Inadequate use of manure, Primitive method of farming, seeds are not of improved varieties, farmers reluctant to use new HYV seeds, Most of the farmers in India tend to preserve seeds by themselves which they use next year without going any sort of lab test and expert advises etc. hence lowering productivity in comparison to other countries.

      -The other points seem to be okay…however, introduction of GM Crops has certain challenges which needs to be tackled. Hence, we need to mention the ways to tackle the issues arising out of GM Crops.

      -Though your attempt also seems to be good. Just need a bit more emphasis on first part of the question (more specificity)…
      Nice attempt overall, Keep writing…

      Marks awarded: 6.5/12.5


        ANUBHAW MISHRA
        ANUBHAW MISHRA
        19 Feb, 2019

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          Pritam Kumar
          19 Feb, 2019

          Hi Anubhaw,
          -The introduction seems okay… though it could have been more better concerning the topic of the question…
          -However, the criticism provided are not at par with the demand of the question…since the question is asking to criticize the new provisions which got amended, your criticisms are of general nature…and not specific to the new amendment….(refer our model answer)
          -Also you have not answered the 2nd part of the question…’whether it is a renewed attack of privacy?’

          -Suggestion: plan your answer before you write. Try being more specific…
          Overall, okay…need to have more focus on the question and address all aspects asked…

          Keep writing…will improve for sure…

          Marks awarded: 4/12.5
          Refer our model answer for better clarity…


            AB
            AB
            19 Feb, 2019

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              Pritam Kumar
              19 Feb, 2019

              Hi AB,
              -The ideas of introduction is good…however, don’t form continuous sentences…break the sentence into small…
              -The question nowhere asks about the pros and cons so don’t put such headings which are not in conformity with the question…it shows the answer is not written for the same question and lack of ability to articulate the words and sentences…
              -Bring criticism of the points…what you have mentioned under pros…
              -Points of conclusion is good…
              -Overall need to focus on and go with the exact demand of the question…such answer can be termed as an average one…
              Though good attempt…keep practicing will improve for sure…

              Marks awarded: 4/12.5


                Satyam Akotiya
                Satyam Akotiya
                19 Feb, 2019

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                  Pritam Kumar
                  19 Feb, 2019

                  Hi Satyam,
                  -Introduction is very poor…what you have mentioned in introductory line is the repetitive sentence of the question only…never repeat the lines of the question in answer, frame your sentences by articulating the ideas…
                  -Bring linkages among points…
                  -The question asks about the criticism…hence it would be good if we criticize the points together while mentioning the features of the amendment…like point 1 and 2 goes against the judgement of SC
                  -The points and ideas on 2nd page is good…and well written…
                  Overall, we need to pay more focus on bringing criticism rather than features…
                  -Though good attempt…keep practicing will improve for sure…keep writing…

                  Marks awarded: 4/12.5