1st December 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

According to many Sociologists, in contemporary India, traditional joint families are being replaced by functional joint families. What do you understand by functional joint families? Why it is increasing in recent years? (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 2)

The draft forest policy, 2018 has been released recently. But, it has attracted more criticism than compliments. Critically analyse the various contentions leveled against the policy. (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 3)

Examine the impact of climate change on Indian agriculture. Highlight India’s efforts to counter it with a special focus on National Innovations in Climate Resilient Agriculture (NICRA). (250 W/ 10 M)

Question 4)

Mr. Biswas is a civil servant in the PMO office. Lately there has been a lot of activity happening around the present education policy and the right to education. Mr. Biswas gets an invitation from a news channel to a debate on the issue. The news channel assures that it will be a non political intellectual debate. The other invitees will be from other prominent field of education. Being a Civil Servant what should Mr. Biswas do? Whether he should express himself on a public platform or not? Suggest Mr. Biswas a suitable action in this regard. (150 W/ 10 M)

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  • 52 Replies to “1st December 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement”

      1. Hi Kapiushon
        – The first two parts of the answer (CC on Agriculture and NICRA and other schemes regarding agri) are approached in good manner.
        – Way forward needs work.
        – Overall decent attempt.

        Marks: 6.5/15

      1. Hi Kapiushon
        – Good intro.
        – Good 1st and 2nd halves of the answer.
        – But missing way forward is the issue in the answer.
        – You should have given the points to improve the policy.

        Marks: 6/15

      1. Hi Isha
        – Quite a decent attempt.
        – Good use of flowcharts once again.
        – There is multi dimensional approach in the answer which is good.
        – Once again decent way forwards

        Marks: 6.5/10

      1. Hi Isha
        – Very good attempt.
        – You covered all the angle in good manner.
        – Explanation is crisp and short
        – Good use of flowcharts.
        – Decent way forwards.

        Marks: 7.5/15

      1. Hi Shefali
        – Nice attempt.
        – All the parts are covered.
        – Good discussion.
        – Language structure and presentation are to the mark

        – Marks: 7.515

      1. Hi Kapiushon
        – The intro is quite large. Dont need to discuss inputs about joint families. Keep it in the first paragraph and then jump onto discuss functional joint family concept.
        – There are various other dimensions regarding increase in functional joint families like urbanisation, less space to live, industrialisation, divide between tier one cities and rest of the countries etc.
        – Apart from this, the points are good.
        – Discussion short and language crisp.

        Marks: 5/10

      1. Whenever i upload there is an issue with the way the solutions get arranged in a wrong way please check page no 2 then page no 1 andthen page no3

        1. Hi Puru
          – No Issues regarding page numbers. We will figure it ot.
          – You misunderstood the demands of the question.
          – Start with describing what you mean by functional joint family.
          – Then discuss what are the reasons behind it.
          – Its (functional joint family) is not a bad thing. Read the model answer!
          – Points in the reasons for these new families are quite poor specially points like social media. Avoid these types of points.

          Marks: 3/10

        1. Hi Puru
          – The first two parts of the answer is approached in good manner.
          – Way forward needs work.
          – Overall decent attempt.

          Marks: 6/15

      1. Hi Abhishek
        – poor Structure and Presentation in the answer.
        – In a single paragraph, you discussed what are the effects of CC on agri, what are the steps that have been taken by the govt etc.
        – This approach is not good.
        – Write in detail and with space between two different points and subheadings
        – Even second part is treaded lightly

        Marks: 3/10

      1. Hi GopeAsem
        – Very good attempt.
        – You covered all the angle in good manner.
        – Explanation is crisp and short

        Marks: 6/10

      1. Hi GopeAsem
        – There is only one issue in the answer, that there is no Way Forward in the answer.
        – While you put criticism of the policy in the domain, but failed to provide solutions to make then policy better.
        – Rest the answer is fine.

        Marks: 6/15

      1. Hi GopeAsem
        – Way forward is missing. You could have given some sollutions to this crisis,
        The first part of the answer is little general in nature in terms of discussion and needs crisp language.
        – The second part is dealt in a better way and its quite solid.

        Marks: 4.5/10

      1. Hi Puru
        – The first part of the answer is little general in nature in terms of discussion and needs crisp language.
        – The second part is dealt in a better way and its quite solid,
        – Good structure and presentation.

        Marks: 5/10

      1. Hi Akshat
        – There are many major points regarding the cause of this phenomenon which you missed.
        – They are migration due to education, employment, less space to live, divide between tier one cities and other parts of India in terms of facilities available, increasing population, government jobs etc.
        – Dont try to paint this phenomenon as something bad or gloomy.

        Marks: 4/10

      1. Hi Akshat
        – The first part of the discussion is Ok.
        – But the criticism of the policy is not to the marks and is quite wayward.
        – Plus no way forward as in how to improve the policy to make it better.

        Marks: 4.5/15

      1. Hi Akshat
        – What are the impacts of CC on agriculture? It has been explicitly asked in the question. You missed to discuss this part completely with only a single statement regarding it.
        – Decent second half discussion.
        – There is no suggestions as in what more needs to be done by govts.
        – The ending of the answer is weak like its intro.

        Marks: 3.5/10

      1. Hi Akshat
        – Good points.
        – But also give some insights on what are his other options and briefly discuss their pros and cons. Then give your opinion.
        – The discussion and approach of the answer is good.

        Marks: 5.5/10

      1. Hi Madhav
        – Well structured answer.
        – All the parts are covered holistically.
        – Good content.
        – Overall very good attempt.

        Marks: 7.5/15

      1. Hi HiddenWarrior
        – The start of the answer is bit wayward and comes to the point quite late.
        – There are various other dimensions regarding increase in functional joint families like urbanisation, less space to live, industrialisation, divide between tier one cities and rest of the countries etc.
        – Presentation needs work.
        – Use bullet points
        Marks: 4.5/10

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