22nd November 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

German diplomatic miscalculations were hugely responsible for WWI. Comment. (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 2)

The Sixth Schedule of the Constitution is often referred to as a charter for autonomy of a wide magnitude, but it has failed to decrease the tension between different stakeholders at the ground level. Elaborate. (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 3)

CBI has played a pivotal role of justice delivery in India since decades. However, the recent CBI crisis not only questions about CBI’s autonomous functioning but also about the Rule of Law under which it functions. Comment on the above point and suggest way forward. (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 4)

Ethics Case Study: A newly appointed Medical Superintendent of a district Government Hospital receives complaints about the negligent attitude of the doctors in times of casualties. The patients are not properly attended. Incidentally it is the only hospital in the city and the vicinity for the poor and needy. What do you propose the Medical Superintendent should do and why? Evaluate various options and suggest suitable measures. (150 W/ 10 M)

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anita raul
anita raul
22 Nov, 2018

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    Pritam Kumar
    25 Nov, 2018

    Kindly upload answers separately…it has been requested repeatedly and multiple times…


      Imgroot
      Imgroot
      22 Nov, 2018

      CDTEST20319
      Ans 3comment imagecomment image

        Pritam Kumar
        25 Nov, 2018

        Hello Imgroot,
        -Very good answer, very precisely written and well presented…well done…keep it up…
        -You have addressed almost all the aspects which the question aspires…

        Very good…keep writing…
        Marks awarded: 7/10


          Shefali kashyap
          Shefali kashyap
          22 Nov, 2018

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            Pritam Kumar
            25 Nov, 2018

            Hello Shefali,
            -Very good answer…precisely written and well arranged ideas…
            -Since intro to conclusion the answer is decent…and presents all the points required by the question…well done…Keep it up…
            -Marks awarded: 7/10


              Shefali kashyap
              Shefali kashyap
              22 Nov, 2018

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                Pritam Kumar
                25 Nov, 2018

                Hello Shefali,
                -Your introduction to the case is impressive…also include the ethical values being violated…like Integrity towards service, oath, public service, human life, competence and accountability etc.
                -Point b) – Informing seniors will not put an end to your duty…seniors will be working through you only…so informing and being tension free will not be a good way to analyze.
                -Point c) seems irrelevant…
                -Point d) also seems irrelevant…
                -Conclusion is absent…
                -Ideas under action mentioned do no seem practically possible…except a) and e)…taking bribe is irrelevant in the context of MO…

                Think points which are more practical keeping in mind the all circumstances…
                Though nice attempt…keep practicing..will improve for sure…
                Keep writing…
                Refer our model answer for better understanding of various actions available to MO.


                  Pritam Kumar
                  25 Nov, 2018

                  Hello Sandeep,
                  -Good introduction…
                  -Good points and ideas as well…
                  -However, 2nd page (point conflict between council ) the explanation is poor…the conflicts are more because of multiple tribes with different ethnicity present in the same council and their demand to have separate council for their grievance redressal…
                  -Bring more relevant points like….lack of political mobilization, regionalism, localism, communism, competition among local officials etc….though points mentioned by you are also good…but certain modification in explanation needed…
                  -Colloquial language is used in conclusion…though ideas are good but there are some grammatical error in sentence formation…
                  -Instead of mentioning historical background and philosophical points in conclusion…suggest the appropriate measures which can improve the situation…
                  Overall, answer is good…could have been more better with more suitable explanations in points…
                  Though nice attempt…keep practicing…
                  Marks awarded: 4.5/10


                    Pritam Kumar
                    26 Nov, 2018

                    Hi Sandeep,
                    -Introduction seems to be okay…though it can be more better…
                    -The collegium system of selection is not being followed yet, at present the selection is done more by the executive order…also a flaw in transparency and intention..
                    The collegium system is mentioned in Lokpal Act but has not been followed yet…
                    -Answer seems incomplete…as there is no discussion about the Rule of Law….as asked in the question….though the points on non-autonomy is good…
                    -Conclusion: It has already been brought under Lokpal Act but adherence is what lacking…

                    Overall, average answer….you missed some the points of the question to address….hence more focus towards question is required…
                    -In this answer…more of conceptual clarity is needed…read more about this topic…

                    Good attempt…keep practicing…

                    Marks awarded: 3.5/10

                    Refer our model answer or other best answers for better clarity….


                      Imgroot
                      Imgroot
                      22 Nov, 2018

                      CDTEST20319
                      Ans 4comment imagecomment image

                        Pritam Kumar
                        26 Nov, 2018

                        Hi Imgroot,
                        -Good way to introduce…however, even more better introduction could have been brought…
                        -Your options are okay…okay…
                        -The option mentioned by you shows that you don’t have faith on doctors doing their duty….though it is obvious when too many complaints are there…but taking action directly without intimating them will be an immature approach….first action should be to maintain status quo…(mention reason), 2nd option should be to summon a meeting…warning, discussing etc. will help to know each other…(mention reason)…3rd option should be to take punitive action if above two options fails…(mention reason)…

                        Though your approach also seems to be okay but more specific and pragmatic options needs to be chosen…

                        Overall, good…keep writing…
                        Marks awarded: 4/10


                          hiddenwarrior
                          hiddenwarrior
                          22 Nov, 2018

                          CDTEST20297
                          Q.4-
                          Answer- It is very common scenario that doctors don’t fulfil their duties properly in rural areas where they are needed the most. They come late and leave before time. It becomes only possible when they become assured that no action will be taken against them. So in that scenario role of Medical Superitendent (M.S.) becomes very important .In the given scenario he has mainly three options which are as following-

                          He can completely ignore the situation and let things go as they are going. As such officers are transferred frequently , he can think that why to take a burden when earlier ones didn’t take any.
                          Another option is that he can call a formal meeting of the concerning doctors at his house and warn them indirectly that if the situation doesn’t improve then he wont hesitate to take harsh actions. At the same time he can ask the doctors if they have any problem or issue which is obstracting them to work properly.

                          Third option is that he can take strict action on the doctors who are found guilty in recent days. It will set an examples for others too.

                          In my opinion taking harsh actions directly can create a situation where all doctors are suspended and hospital is doctorless . So second option seems more suitable and even then if they don’t improve then actions must be taken without any delay.

                            Pritam Kumar
                            26 Nov, 2018

                            Hi Hiddenwarriou,
                            -Answer seems to be good…with good introduction and good flow of ideas…
                            -However, you need to mention the justification with the various options available with MS…means need to talk merits as well as demerits…or moreover why that option?…..though you have brought some of the justification but they are incomplete….also there is no justification with 2nd option…
                            Conclusion is good…and taking 2nd then third action is also good…nicely written…

                            Overall, Good answer, keep it up…keep writing…
                            Marks awarded: 5/10


                              prafull sharma
                              22 Nov, 2018

                              CDTEST20324- Q3 [Need some tips on this one, struggled to write an answer on this one]

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                                Pritam Kumar
                                26 Nov, 2018

                                Hi Prafull,
                                -You made the discussion a lengthy one…we don’t need to go in much historical details…only mentioning about its function and some achievements will form a good introduction…
                                -I have a suggestion…if the discussion going long, you can mention the points in bullet form…but this bullet form should not be in introduction and conclusion…means introduction and conclusion must be in paragraphs…and the points in main body can be mentioned in bullet form…but ensure there is connectivity in points…also ensure that similar like points should be together…it should not be randomly mentioned without any start and ending point…this will save your word as well as time…
                                -Many a times the phrase ‘Rule of Law’ has been used on 2nd page…making discussion a lengthy one…
                                -Point 3 on third page is the repetitive one of point 1 and 2…the same argument has been mentioned there…
                                -Conclusion seems to okay…

                                Overall, answer is good in content and presentation wise…but need to be within word limit…

                                Good approach…keep practicing…
                                Marks awarded: 5/10


                                  prafull sharma
                                  22 Nov, 2018

                                  CDTEST20324 -Q3 [I need some tips on this, could not articulate an answer on this well :(]


                                    Kapiushon
                                    Kapiushon
                                    22 Nov, 2018

                                    CDTEST20663
                                    answer 1
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                                      Pritam Kumar
                                      26 Nov, 2018

                                      Hi Kapiushon,
                                      -Very good introduction…
                                      -Point 1 on 1st page need completion…Germany opposed the French intervention in the internal affairs of Morocco, but England took the part of France. This created bitterness among France and Germany….
                                      -point 3 on 2nd page…the support given to France…
                                      -Points mentioned are good…but need to bring more points…add…sending gun boat to Agadi port, British could not allow the Germany to be the balancing power in Europe and so supported France which has been miscalculated by Germany, Germany’s promise to assist Serbia against Serbia etc…
                                      -Though your points are also good and well written…

                                      Overall, nice attempt…and you tried to mention some point being within the word limit…good one…though more points can be incorporated…
                                      Keep practicing…

                                      Marks awarded: 6.5/15


                                        Dhritiman
                                        Dhritiman
                                        24 Nov, 2018

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                                          Pritam Kumar
                                          26 Nov, 2018

                                          Hi Dhritiman,
                                          -Ideas in introduction is poor…also sentence is not clear….
                                          -Ideas in your points are too general and also not completely focused towards diplomatic failure…though the first point of 2nd page is okay…Your points lack reason of such diplomatic failure…
                                          -There is no conclusion in answer…

                                          Overall an average answer, keep practicing will improve for sure…
                                          Marks awarded: 5.5/15

                                            Dhritiman
                                            Dhritiman
                                            27 Nov, 2018

                                            thnks sir..actually its my general idea.i have not revised world history


                                              Dhritiman
                                              Dhritiman
                                              24 Nov, 2018

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                                                Pritam Kumar
                                                26 Nov, 2018

                                                Hi Dhritiman,
                                                -Too poor handwriting…hence reviewing accordingly….
                                                -What do you want to say in introduction is not clear…Poor handwriting with incomplete sentences…poor intro…diagram is also not clear…Also there is no example mentioned…
                                                -point 1 and 2 and 2 on first page are more of political one…you have not mentioned about the problem in selection…working under rule of law…etc…
                                                -Also need to mention how it failed to adhere on the rule of law….
                                                -Points under way forward is good…
                                                -Poor conclusion…

                                                Overall, this is an average or below average answer…
                                                Keep practicing…will improve for sure…

                                                Marks awarded: 3/10


                                                  Dhritiman
                                                  Dhritiman
                                                  24 Nov, 2018

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                                                    Dhritiman
                                                    Dhritiman
                                                    24 Nov, 2018

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                                                      Pritam Kumar
                                                      26 Nov, 2018

                                                      Hi Dhritiman,
                                                      -Kindly work on your handwriting as soon as possible…at least write the letters of the word properly…its a humble request and has been intimated many times…kindly adhere…
                                                      -Idea in introduction is good but presentation is poor…
                                                      -The individual points mentioned needs more clarity and completeness…though ideas are good…
                                                      -Points are good…but need to focus on presentation…and clarity in sentences…

                                                      Overall the ideas in answer seems good but due to poor presentation, the answer remains average…You have improved much from the earlier answers, but still need to work more upon presentation…
                                                      though nice attempt…keep practicing…will improve for sure…
                                                      Keep writing…

                                                      Marks awarded: 3.5/10
                                                      Refer our model answer or other best answer reviewed for better clarity…