24th November 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

Why did Buddhism spread outside India but Jainism could not? (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 2)

India has achieved the political justice, but not the social and economic justice. Illustrate the steps required to be taken towards its fulfillment. (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 3)

Give an account of the growth and development of renewable energy in India. Is India doing enough on the Renewable energy front? (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 4)

Ethics: Political Manifestoes are considered to be the aspirations of people which the political bosses promise to fulfill after winning election. However, there is no accountability in case of false promise or failure to fulfill them. Analyze the moral issues involved in this case and suggest suitable measures to make our leaders accountable. (150 W/ 10 M)

 

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Shefali kashyap
Shefali kashyap
24 Nov, 2018

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    Pritam Kumar
    28 Nov, 2018

    Hi Shefali,
    -Answer seems to be very good…
    -Well explained ideas and precisely written…good points with examples…

    -Bring some more ideas in conclusion…

    Very good…Keep it up…well done…

    Marks awarded: 6/10


      Pritam Kumar
      29 Nov, 2018

      Hi Sandeep,
      -Introduction seems okay…
      -2nd para explains socio-economic in narrow context…its not only access of goods…but also includes equality of status and opportunity (economic opportunity and social status)…
      -Third para…reservation is social justice…last line will be difficult to substantiate (shows biasness)…so avoid…You need to be clear about different types of justice…
      -Political justice…equal political rights, equal access to all political offices, equal voice in government, franchise, representative political democracy eg decentralization….
      -Social Justice…various types of reservation, protection of women, child especially girl child, protection of old age etc…
      -Economic justice…access to basic daily needs at affordable cost and ability of persons to buy…equal opportunity in matters of employment etc…

      -Way forward and conclusion is good…

      Overall good attempt…need to improve while answering first part of answer…the rest is good and well presented…

      Keep it up…keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 5/10


        Shefali kashyap
        Shefali kashyap
        24 Nov, 2018

        CDTEST 21004 answer 2comment imagecomment image

          Pritam Kumar
          29 Nov, 2018

          Hi Shefali,
          -Your answer seems to be good…but the points connotes general ideas…such answers are general and are considered as average….

          The following changes need to be brought….
          -At least explain the meaning of three type of justice…
          -then explain how we achieved political justice…example like Universal Adult Franchise, equal political rights, equal access to all political offices, equal voice in government, representative political democracy eg decentralization…etc…
          -Further, Economic justice means ability to equal access of resources…we can substantiate with examples…

          -Under steps that can be taken….social reforms…need to be more specific…like passing and implementing UCC, empowering women, child and old age…steps to uplift social status of SCs/STs etc…
          Under Economic reforms….changes in direct tax, making citizens more efficient, skilled, and productive (economically)etc..we can quote various example of schemes…

          Conclusion seems okay…but it can be made more impressive…

          Overall, attempt is good…more specificity in approach needed…keep writing…will improve…
          Marks awarded: 4/10


            Minakshi
            24 Nov, 2018

            CDTEST20742
            Question 3.
            The journey of untapping country’s renewable energy potential started from Bhakra Nangal dam which Jawaharlal nehru described as ‘New temple of resurgent india”. Now the country is exploring other potential dimensions with solar, wind and biomass.
            With growing economy and population, the energy need is bound to increase multi folds and in the wake of climate crisis, renewable energy becomes one of India top priorities.
            Being 4th largest carbon emitter of the world and signatory of Paris climate accord, India has set target of producing 175GW of renewable energy, with 100GW solar, 60GW wind, 10GW biomass and 5GW with small Hydropower.
            Solar energy makes the largest share of it followed by wind, hydropower and biomass.
            Government has taken many policy initiatives and programs to realise true spirit of renewable energy:
            1. Solar park, roof top solar energy, solar-wind grid energy generation
            2. India is playing leading role in international solar alliance with France .
            3. National policy on Biofuels to increase production of clean energy.
            4. PPP model in wind parks in Tamil Nadu with attractive subsidies and tariffs.

            These efforts are first steps toward this. To realise potential of renewable energy fully, Government should focus on the followings:
            1. Program implementation
            2. Right technology
            3. viable model
            4. power purchase agreement structure
            5. Research and innovation

            To ensure energy supply of the country in the age of climate change crisis and unstable geopolitical scenario, renewable energy is the solution.

              Pritam Kumar
              29 Nov, 2018

              Hi Minakshi,
              Answer is very good…precisely written…
              -Very impressive introduction…with logical flow of ideas…well presented…effectively answered the question…
              -Nice approach…keep it up…
              Keep writing…
              Marks awarded: 8/10


                Pritam Kumar
                29 Nov, 2018

                Hello Prafull,
                You exceeded the word limit…
                -Ideas in 1st para is good…but it is not the complete introduction…entire first page is dedicated to the introduction only…need to be more precise…
                -2nd para you have started with the word while…but there is no counter point mentioned…
                -2nd page 1st para…mentioned at wrong place…it would have come between intro and steps needed…
                -Points mentioned are good…but contain unnecessary elaboration…And also the ideas are mixed up…Not arranged as social and economical justice…
                -Conclusion is okay…

                Overall, good attempt…need to work on planning before writing…it is good that you always try to bring perfectness in your answer but arrangement of ideas is equally important to make answer good, better and best…

                Nice approach…keep writing…will improve for sure…

                Marks awarded: 4/10


                  Pritam Kumar
                  29 Nov, 2018

                  Hi Prafull,
                  -There is no maturity in language…points mentioned seems containing colloquial dialogue…
                  -Introduction should simply explain what constitute the renewable energy…further it should explain India’s present capacity…
                  -Next, India’s commitment…(though your points here are good)…
                  -Steps to be taken are good…
                  -Conclusion also seems okay…
                  -Overall, good attempt…however, need to know the priority of points…and subsequent arrangement based on logic and demand of question…
                  -Again the same suggestion…Plan before writing…
                  Though this one is improved attempt…keep practicing..will sure improve further…

                  Keep writing…
                  Marks awarded: 4.5/10


                    anita raul
                    anita raul
                    25 Nov, 2018

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                      anita raul
                      25 Nov, 2018

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                        anita raul
                        25 Nov, 2018

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                          25 Nov, 2018

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                            Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
                            Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
                            26 Nov, 2018

                            CDTEST21066
                            Q1
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                              Pritam Kumar
                              29 Nov, 2018

                              Hi Pragnya,
                              Very good answer….excellent points…
                              -Good flow of ideas with well arranged points…precisely written…
                              -Well done…keep it up…
                              Marks awarded: 6/10


                                Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
                                Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
                                26 Nov, 2018

                                CDTEST21066
                                Q4
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                                  Pritam Kumar
                                  29 Nov, 2018

                                  Hi Pragnya,
                                  -Very good answer…Nice and precise introduction…
                                  -Various moral actions are well mentioned and beautifully explained…
                                  -Point of suggestions is also good…
                                  However, Conclusion is missing…

                                  Overall, very good attempt…well written…keep writing…
                                  Marks awarded: 5.5/10


                                    Invincible
                                    Invincible
                                    26 Nov, 2018

                                    CDTEST 20378…Q-01comment imagecomment image

                                      Pritam Kumar
                                      29 Nov, 2018

                                      Hi Invincible,
                                      -Ideas of introduction is good…However, you took two para to introduce the topic…its a lengthy one…make it more precise…
                                      -Bring More points on reasons…rather making intro and conclusion long…
                                      -Very few points have been brought in reasons…
                                      -1st para…2nd page…Jainism was also spread outside India and was equally known…rather being confined in local areas (as you have mentioned)…
                                      2nd point on 2nd page need clarity…
                                      -Overall, the answer is general…with few points…need to incorporate more similar ideas…
                                      however, good attempt…keep practicing…will improve…
                                      Keep writing…
                                      Marks awarded: 3.5/10


                                        Invincible
                                        Invincible
                                        26 Nov, 2018

                                        CDTEST 20378…Q-02comment imagecomment image

                                          Pritam Kumar
                                          29 Nov, 2018

                                          Hi Invincible,
                                          -Ideas in Introduction seems very general…First para is okay…but next we atleast need to explain about what constitute these three justice…
                                          -Ideas are mixed up…and not arranged logically…Your answer does not differentiate the ideology of three justices…
                                          -Overall, very general, below average answer…there are limitation in points as well as ideas…

                                          Refer some of the best answer reviewed or our model answer for better clarity….

                                          Keep practicing…
                                          Marks awarded: 3/10


                                            Shivani Sharma
                                            1 Dec, 2018

                                            CDTEST20563 Ans-1,Sorry for the delay sircomment imagecomment imagecomment image


                                              Shivani Sharma
                                              1 Dec, 2018

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