24th November 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

Why did Buddhism spread outside India but Jainism could not? (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 2)

India has achieved the political justice, but not the social and economic justice. Illustrate the steps required to be taken towards its fulfillment. (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 3)

Give an account of the growth and development of renewable energy in India. Is India doing enough on the Renewable energy front? (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 4)

Ethics: Political Manifestoes are considered to be the aspirations of people which the political bosses promise to fulfill after winning election. However, there is no accountability in case of false promise or failure to fulfill them. Analyze the moral issues involved in this case and suggest suitable measures to make our leaders accountable. (150 W/ 10 M)

 

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    Shefali kashyap
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    Shefali kashyap

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Shefali,
    -Answer seems to be very good…
    -Well explained ideas and precisely written…good points with examples…

    -Bring some more ideas in conclusion…

    Very good…Keep it up…well done…

    Marks awarded: 6/10

    Sandeep Goyal
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Sandeep, -Introduction seems okay… -2nd para explains socio-economic in narrow context…its not only access of goods…but also includes equality of status and opportunity (economic opportunity and social status)… -Third para…reservation is social justice…last line will be difficult to substantiate (shows biasness)…so avoid…You need to be clear about different types of justice… -Political justice…equal political rights, equal access to all political offices, equal voice in government, franchise, representative political democracy eg decentralization…. -Social Justice…various types of reservation, protection of women, child especially girl child, protection of old age etc… -Economic justice…access to basic daily needs at affordable cost and ability… Read more »

    Shefali kashyap
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    Shefali kashyap

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Shefali, -Your answer seems to be good…but the points connotes general ideas…such answers are general and are considered as average…. The following changes need to be brought…. -At least explain the meaning of three type of justice… -then explain how we achieved political justice…example like Universal Adult Franchise, equal political rights, equal access to all political offices, equal voice in government, representative political democracy eg decentralization…etc… -Further, Economic justice means ability to equal access of resources…we can substantiate with examples… -Under steps that can be taken….social reforms…need to be more specific…like passing and implementing UCC, empowering women, child and… Read more »

    Minakshi
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    CDTEST20742 Question 3. The journey of untapping country’s renewable energy potential started from Bhakra Nangal dam which Jawaharlal nehru described as ‘New temple of resurgent india”. Now the country is exploring other potential dimensions with solar, wind and biomass. With growing economy and population, the energy need is bound to increase multi folds and in the wake of climate crisis, renewable energy becomes one of India top priorities. Being 4th largest carbon emitter of the world and signatory of Paris climate accord, India has set target of producing 175GW of renewable energy, with 100GW solar, 60GW wind, 10GW biomass and… Read more »

    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Minakshi,
    Answer is very good…precisely written…
    -Very impressive introduction…with logical flow of ideas…well presented…effectively answered the question…
    -Nice approach…keep it up…
    Keep writing…
    Marks awarded: 8/10

    prafull sharma
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hello Prafull, You exceeded the word limit… -Ideas in 1st para is good…but it is not the complete introduction…entire first page is dedicated to the introduction only…need to be more precise… -2nd para you have started with the word while…but there is no counter point mentioned… -2nd page 1st para…mentioned at wrong place…it would have come between intro and steps needed… -Points mentioned are good…but contain unnecessary elaboration…And also the ideas are mixed up…Not arranged as social and economical justice… -Conclusion is okay… Overall, good attempt…need to work on planning before writing…it is good that you always try to bring… Read more »

    prafull sharma
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Prafull,
    -There is no maturity in language…points mentioned seems containing colloquial dialogue…
    -Introduction should simply explain what constitute the renewable energy…further it should explain India’s present capacity…
    -Next, India’s commitment…(though your points here are good)…
    -Steps to be taken are good…
    -Conclusion also seems okay…
    -Overall, good attempt…however, need to know the priority of points…and subsequent arrangement based on logic and demand of question…
    -Again the same suggestion…Plan before writing…
    Though this one is improved attempt…keep practicing..will sure improve further…

    Keep writing…
    Marks awarded: 4.5/10

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    Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
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    Pragnya Smita Panigrahi

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Pragnya,
    Very good answer….excellent points…
    -Good flow of ideas with well arranged points…precisely written…
    -Well done…keep it up…
    Marks awarded: 6/10

    Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Pragnya,
    -Very good answer…Nice and precise introduction…
    -Various moral actions are well mentioned and beautifully explained…
    -Point of suggestions is also good…
    However, Conclusion is missing…

    Overall, very good attempt…well written…keep writing…
    Marks awarded: 5.5/10

    Invincible
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Invincible,
    -Ideas of introduction is good…However, you took two para to introduce the topic…its a lengthy one…make it more precise…
    -Bring More points on reasons…rather making intro and conclusion long…
    -Very few points have been brought in reasons…
    -1st para…2nd page…Jainism was also spread outside India and was equally known…rather being confined in local areas (as you have mentioned)…
    2nd point on 2nd page need clarity…
    -Overall, the answer is general…with few points…need to incorporate more similar ideas…
    however, good attempt…keep practicing…will improve…
    Keep writing…
    Marks awarded: 3.5/10

    Invincible
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    Invincible

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Invincible,
    -Ideas in Introduction seems very general…First para is okay…but next we atleast need to explain about what constitute these three justice…
    -Ideas are mixed up…and not arranged logically…Your answer does not differentiate the ideology of three justices…
    -Overall, very general, below average answer…there are limitation in points as well as ideas…

    Refer some of the best answer reviewed or our model answer for better clarity….

    Keep practicing…
    Marks awarded: 3/10

    Shivani Sharma
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    CDTEST20563 Ans-1,Sorry for the delay sircomment imagecomment imagecomment image

    Shivani Sharma
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    CDTEST20563 Ans-2, Sorry for the delay sircomment imagecomment imagecomment image