26th November 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

“The Enlightenment thinkers differed widely amongst themselves, but all of them shared some major ideas that together make up the philosophy of Enlightenment.” Elucidate. (150 W)

Question 2)

“Far from enabling some sort of constitutional rule, governors have consistently been party to all sorts of unconstitutional and unethical moves to undermine democracy and federalism in India.” Examine the statement in the context of recent constitutional crisis in different Indian states. (200 W 12½ M)

Question 3)

What is cloud computing and what are the security risks associated with it? Do you think it is helpful in improving the quality of governance? Discuss with examples. (150 W)

Question 4)

The crisis of ethics in public life is more because of attitudinal problem of public servants rather than organisational ineffectiveness. Critically analyse. (150 W)

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Akshat Sikri
Akshat Sikri
26 Nov, 2018

CDTEST 20749
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    Pritam Kumar
    30 Nov, 2018

    Hi Akshat,
    -I think You didn’t get the question properly…The answer is not at par with the question asked…
    -The enlightenment era is also known as the era of renaissance…Where the thinkers questioned the traditional orthodox practices which were prevailing in society…for e.g. Sati, Blind faith in God, traditional rituals, thinking against widow remarriage etc…etc…etc…Your answer no where talks about such things…

    -Kindly refer our model answer or other best answer reviewed for better clarity…


      Akshat Sikri
      Akshat Sikri
      26 Nov, 2018

      CDTEST20749
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        Pritam Kumar
        30 Nov, 2018

        Hi Akshat,
        -You need to work on Introduction as well as Conclusion…The introduction here is incomplete…
        -Very general answer…
        Last point on the first page and the subsequent three points are talking about the drawbacks of governors’ post and not about the crisis…and hence the next para president rule u/a 365 have seen crisis…seems unjustified…
        -First of all talk about the constitutional provision for Governors…why he is puppet rather than an independent authority…This is missing in your answer…
        -Need to mention about the discretionary powers of governors…and specifically need to mention where the governor used his/her powers beyond the prescribed limit….mention some examples…like Arunachal Pradesh, U’khand, J & K (which is mentioned as a reference), Goa etc…(You Points are just giving reference and not specifically proving it)
        -Next you can mention some suggestion and a comprehensive conclusion…

        Overall, this is an average answer…keep practicing..will improve for sure…keep writing..
        Marks awarded: 4/12.5


          Akshat Sikri
          Akshat Sikri
          26 Nov, 2018

          CDTEST20749
          ANS3
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            Pritam Kumar
            30 Nov, 2018

            Hi Akshat,
            -Introduction seems to be giving half meaning…Cloud Computing is more than what you have mentioned…It is pool of shared resources include networks, servers, storage, applications, and services that can be rapidly provisioned and released with minimal management effort or service provider interaction…etc…etc…(refer model answer)…
            -The diagram depicts normal functioning of daily internet service…
            -Ideas in individual point are good but are not explained in adequate manner…
            -Poor and narrow points in how it can help in governance…
            -Its not only the matter or updation…but also involves regulation, monitoring, cyber protection etc…

            Overall, this is an average effort…could have been better if specific points have been brought in it…

            Though good attempt…keep practicing…will improve for sure…keep writing…
            Marks awarded: 3/10


              Akshat Sikri
              Akshat Sikri
              26 Nov, 2018

              CDTEST20749
              ANS4
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                Pritam Kumar
                30 Nov, 2018

                Hi Akshat,
                -There is no structure for answer…
                -Individual ideas are incomplete…and depicts narrow view…
                -Ideas in you points shows that all civil servants face same type of attitudinal problem and it is the organization which is bad rather the civil servant…
                -Mere mentioning points will not serve the purpose…they need be justified as well…
                -Overall, it seems incomplete effort for me…below general answer…
                Though nice attempt…keep practicing will improve for sure…,Keep writing…

                Refer our model answer for better clarity…


                  Kapiushon
                  Kapiushon
                  26 Nov, 2018

                  CDTEST20663
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                    Pritam Kumar
                    30 Nov, 2018

                    Hi Kapiushon,
                    -Introduction seems to be okay…though it can be made more effective…
                    -2nd page…point 2 need more explanation and clarity…
                    -The rest of the points seems very good…and well presented…
                    -Conclusion can be made more comprehensive…you can talk about making Governors’ post an elected one…(directly or indirectly)…

                    Overall, very good approach…well presented ideas…keep it up…keep writing…

                    Marks awarded: 6.5/12.5


                      Shefali kashyap
                      Shefali kashyap
                      26 Nov, 2018

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                        Pritam Kumar
                        30 Nov, 2018

                        Hi Shefali,
                        -Introductory para seems to be good…
                        -Features also seems to be good…
                        -However, third para…talking about Microsoft…does not suit here (narrows effort)…instead we can talk about increased user friendly and growing demand in world, it can have some security issues…
                        -Here point a) does not talk about the security threat…rather the point is more of defensive one…Point b) – narrow idea…(HERE MORE CONCEPTUAL CLARITY NEEDED)…
                        -Under governance for smart city and banking…explanation is not appropriate…Here all points are like encouraging Digital India rather Cloud Computing…
                        -Poor and colloquial ideas in way forward…

                        Overall, this answer is an average one…and shows lack of conceptual clarity…

                        Though nice attempt…keep practicing…will improve for sure…
                        Keep Writing…
                        Marks awarded: 3.5/10


                          Kapiushon
                          Kapiushon
                          26 Nov, 2018

                          CDTEST20663
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                            Pritam Kumar
                            30 Nov, 2018

                            Hi Kapiushon,
                            -Your introduction narrows the idea of Cloud Computing…its not only for storage…rather amalgamation of various things…It is a pool of shared resources include networks, servers, storage, applications, and services that can be rapidly provisioned and released with minimal management effort or service provider interaction…(Refer model answer)…
                            -Various security issues mentioned are good…also add…the issue of regulatory compliance, sensitive data process, and data segregation…etc…
                            -Very good points under governance as well…
                            -However, conclusion could have been more better…
                            Overall, good…content wise good except intro and conclusion…need to improve intro and conclusion…

                            Good attempt…keep writing…

                            Marks awarded: 5/10


                              Shefali kashyap
                              Shefali kashyap
                              26 Nov, 2018

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                                Pritam Kumar
                                30 Nov, 2018

                                Hi Shefali,
                                -Very Good answer….excellent points…
                                -Very precisely written and well presented ideas…beautifully explained points…
                                WELL DONE…Very nice approach…keep it up…
                                Keep writing…
                                Marks awarded: 6.5/10


                                  kunal
                                  26 Nov, 2018

                                  bhai be careful with word limit it has even crossed 250 word and question was for 150 words

                                    Pritam Kumar
                                    2 Dec, 2018

                                    Hi Prafull,
                                    -Introduction seems to be good…However, it can be made more precise…
                                    -Security risks and way forward is also good…however, its a lengthy process…
                                    -Good conclusion as well…
                                    Overall, the answer is good content wise…need to work on making it precise by more synchronization of points…
                                    Though good attempt…keep practicing…precision and perfections are the matter of practice…keep writing….
                                    Marks awarded: 5/10


                                      anita raul
                                      anita raul
                                      27 Nov, 2018

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                                        Pritam Kumar
                                        30 Nov, 2018

                                        Hi Anita,
                                        -Ideas inintroduction seem to be okay…however, need to connect the idea with attitude…
                                        -2nd para…example is more for governance rather attitude…
                                        -Some of the examples are out of the context here…like road accident, many people living below poverty line…(such example shows narrow idea or lack of conceptual clarity regarding the topic)…
                                        -2nd para in 2nd page is too big and contains grammatically error sentences…
                                        -Your presentation is very-very general and maximum portion of the answer is out of context….different from the what the question aspires…

                                        -I think your answer is not at par with the question asked…
                                        Keep practicing…will improve for sure….keep writing…

                                        Refer our model answer for better clarity…


                                          anita raul
                                          anita raul
                                          27 Nov, 2018

                                          answar 3comment image comment image

                                            Pritam Kumar
                                            30 Nov, 2018

                                            Hi Anita,
                                            -Very good introduction….
                                            -Under security challenges…first two points are good, the rest are incomplete and are very general…these are obvious points which should not be mentioned rather be understood through more wider points…
                                            -Mixed up ideas in governance as well…
                                            Overall, very general answer….an average one…

                                            Need to work on bringing specificity in your answer…A good answer requires wider relevant points arranged in logical order with flow in presentation always keeping in mind the demand of the question…each and every line should be talking the relevancy of question…

                                            Though, nice attempt…keep practicing…will improve for sure…keep writing…

                                            Marks awarded: 4/10

                                            Refer our model answer for better clarity…


                                              anita raul
                                              anita raul
                                              27 Nov, 2018

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                                                Pritam Kumar
                                                30 Nov, 2018

                                                Hi Anita,
                                                Need to bring maturity in your language…
                                                -There is a proper framework for any answer…without which there is no benefit of writing answer…i.e. Introduction, main body and conclusion…there is no indication of intro and main body in your answer…it starts randomly and finishes without completing any ideas…
                                                -The question no where asks about J&K…though it can be an example for Governor’s discretionary powers…

                                                It seems you are writing for the sake of writing only and not fulfilling the demand of the question…
                                                Kindly go through the topic before writing and plan your answer before writing on paper…

                                                Please observe the answer pattern or framework from other best answer reviewed…
                                                Refer our model answer for better clarity…
                                                Keep writing…

                                                  anita raul
                                                  anita raul
                                                  1 Dec, 2018

                                                  thank u sir for reviewing i will improved my weak part ,thanks.


                                                    Kapiushon
                                                    Kapiushon
                                                    27 Nov, 2018

                                                    Hello sir,
                                                    I have been writing for last 20 days and this platform has been immensely helpful. Especially to over come that huge initial inertia and want of perfection. Continuous feedback help us to know if we are in right direction and also gives us a push to work harder. Current affairs question are especially very good and are helping me in my topic wise preparation strategy (such as AI. block-chain, regulatory bodies, CBI, RBI etc)
                                                    I have some suggestion-
                                                    1) Please provide a subject wise schedule for static part. synchronising it with mains test series would be a good idea as it would helpful in covering and revising static part in a systematic manner. currently we have to juggle between different static subject and topics. For ex questions like magma, social reform, paintings, WW1 etc makes us to go to different subjects disrupting our static revision schedule.
                                                    2) Instead of daily ethics question include it in the schedule as it requires considerable revision.
                                                    3} More current affair based questions.

                                                    Thank you again for all your efforts and creating this exclusive platform for dedicated aspirants.

                                                      Pritam Kumar
                                                      30 Nov, 2018

                                                      Hello Kapiushon,
                                                      We feel your concern as genuine and are thinking on you points. Will be coming up with new ideas soon…
                                                      Keep writing…we team CD feel privileged to help you all in getting through this examination…Good Luck


                                                        Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
                                                        Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
                                                        28 Nov, 2018

                                                        Q3
                                                        CDTEST21066
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                                                          Pritam Kumar
                                                          2 Dec, 2018

                                                          Hi Pragnya,
                                                          -Introduction seems to be okay…CC is not only storing and accessing…its amalgamation of various other facts…like…pool of shared resources include networks, servers, storage, applications, and services that can be rapidly provisioned and released with minimal management effort or minimal service provider interaction…
                                                          -In 2nd para…we can not say its usage is limited…need regulation…
                                                          -The rest of the points are good and well arranged…
                                                          Overall, good answer…points are good and well written…keep it up…
                                                          Marks awarded: 5.5/10


                                                            Kapiushon
                                                            Kapiushon
                                                            29 Nov, 2018

                                                            CDTEST20663
                                                            answer 4
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                                                              Pritam Kumar
                                                              2 Dec, 2018

                                                              Hi Kapiushon,
                                                              Answer is good structure wise but points are general…need to make them more specific…
                                                              -Intro seems okay…The points of attitude are also okay…but they need supportive examples…
                                                              -Too general approach in answer…

                                                              Overall good…need to be more specific…
                                                              Keep practicing…will improve for sure…
                                                              Marks awarded: 4/10
                                                              Refer our model answer for better clarity…


                                                                Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
                                                                Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
                                                                30 Nov, 2018

                                                                Q2
                                                                CDTEST21066comment image comment image

                                                                  Pritam Kumar
                                                                  2 Dec, 2018

                                                                  Hi Prangya,
                                                                  -Very good answer and precisely written…Good articulation of language…
                                                                  -Very good introduction…nicely presented…
                                                                  -2nd paragraph, first line…it seems repetition of the sentences of question…need to change…avoid repetition…
                                                                  -The rest of the points are good and beautifully arranged…
                                                                  WELL DONE…keep it up…keep writing…
                                                                  Marks awarded: 7.5/12.5