26th November 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

“The Enlightenment thinkers differed widely amongst themselves, but all of them shared some major ideas that together make up the philosophy of Enlightenment.” Elucidate. (150 W)

Question 2)

“Far from enabling some sort of constitutional rule, governors have consistently been party to all sorts of unconstitutional and unethical moves to undermine democracy and federalism in India.” Examine the statement in the context of recent constitutional crisis in different Indian states. (200 W 12½ M)

Question 3)

What is cloud computing and what are the security risks associated with it? Do you think it is helpful in improving the quality of governance? Discuss with examples. (150 W)

Question 4)

The crisis of ethics in public life is more because of attitudinal problem of public servants rather than organisational ineffectiveness. Critically analyse. (150 W)

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    Akshat Sikri
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    Akshat Sikri

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Akshat,
    -I think You didn’t get the question properly…The answer is not at par with the question asked…
    -The enlightenment era is also known as the era of renaissance…Where the thinkers questioned the traditional orthodox practices which were prevailing in society…for e.g. Sati, Blind faith in God, traditional rituals, thinking against widow remarriage etc…etc…etc…Your answer no where talks about such things…

    -Kindly refer our model answer or other best answer reviewed for better clarity…

    Akshat Sikri
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    Akshat Sikri

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Akshat, -You need to work on Introduction as well as Conclusion…The introduction here is incomplete… -Very general answer… Last point on the first page and the subsequent three points are talking about the drawbacks of governors’ post and not about the crisis…and hence the next para president rule u/a 365 have seen crisis…seems unjustified… -First of all talk about the constitutional provision for Governors…why he is puppet rather than an independent authority…This is missing in your answer… -Need to mention about the discretionary powers of governors…and specifically need to mention where the governor used his/her powers beyond the prescribed… Read more »

    Akshat Sikri
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    Akshat Sikri

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Akshat, -Introduction seems to be giving half meaning…Cloud Computing is more than what you have mentioned…It is pool of shared resources include networks, servers, storage, applications, and services that can be rapidly provisioned and released with minimal management effort or service provider interaction…etc…etc…(refer model answer)… -The diagram depicts normal functioning of daily internet service… -Ideas in individual point are good but are not explained in adequate manner… -Poor and narrow points in how it can help in governance… -Its not only the matter or updation…but also involves regulation, monitoring, cyber protection etc… Overall, this is an average effort…could have… Read more »

    Akshat Sikri
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    Akshat Sikri

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Akshat,
    -There is no structure for answer…
    -Individual ideas are incomplete…and depicts narrow view…
    -Ideas in you points shows that all civil servants face same type of attitudinal problem and it is the organization which is bad rather the civil servant…
    -Mere mentioning points will not serve the purpose…they need be justified as well…
    -Overall, it seems incomplete effort for me…below general answer…
    Though nice attempt…keep practicing will improve for sure…,Keep writing…

    Refer our model answer for better clarity…

    Kapiushon
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    Kapiushon

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Kapiushon,
    -Introduction seems to be okay…though it can be made more effective…
    -2nd page…point 2 need more explanation and clarity…
    -The rest of the points seems very good…and well presented…
    -Conclusion can be made more comprehensive…you can talk about making Governors’ post an elected one…(directly or indirectly)…

    Overall, very good approach…well presented ideas…keep it up…keep writing…

    Marks awarded: 6.5/12.5

    Shefali kashyap
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Shefali, -Introductory para seems to be good… -Features also seems to be good… -However, third para…talking about Microsoft…does not suit here (narrows effort)…instead we can talk about increased user friendly and growing demand in world, it can have some security issues… -Here point a) does not talk about the security threat…rather the point is more of defensive one…Point b) – narrow idea…(HERE MORE CONCEPTUAL CLARITY NEEDED)… -Under governance for smart city and banking…explanation is not appropriate…Here all points are like encouraging Digital India rather Cloud Computing… -Poor and colloquial ideas in way forward… Overall, this answer is an average… Read more »

    Kapiushon
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Kapiushon,
    -Your introduction narrows the idea of Cloud Computing…its not only for storage…rather amalgamation of various things…It is a pool of shared resources include networks, servers, storage, applications, and services that can be rapidly provisioned and released with minimal management effort or service provider interaction…(Refer model answer)…
    -Various security issues mentioned are good…also add…the issue of regulatory compliance, sensitive data process, and data segregation…etc…
    -Very good points under governance as well…
    -However, conclusion could have been more better…
    Overall, good…content wise good except intro and conclusion…need to improve intro and conclusion…

    Good attempt…keep writing…

    Marks awarded: 5/10

    Shefali kashyap
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    Shefali kashyap

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Shefali,
    -Very Good answer….excellent points…
    -Very precisely written and well presented ideas…beautifully explained points…
    WELL DONE…Very nice approach…keep it up…
    Keep writing…
    Marks awarded: 6.5/10

    prafull sharma
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    kunal
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    bhai be careful with word limit it has even crossed 250 word and question was for 150 words

    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Prafull,
    -Introduction seems to be good…However, it can be made more precise…
    -Security risks and way forward is also good…however, its a lengthy process…
    -Good conclusion as well…
    Overall, the answer is good content wise…need to work on making it precise by more synchronization of points…
    Though good attempt…keep practicing…precision and perfections are the matter of practice…keep writing….
    Marks awarded: 5/10

    anita raul
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Anita, -Ideas inintroduction seem to be okay…however, need to connect the idea with attitude… -2nd para…example is more for governance rather attitude… -Some of the examples are out of the context here…like road accident, many people living below poverty line…(such example shows narrow idea or lack of conceptual clarity regarding the topic)… -2nd para in 2nd page is too big and contains grammatically error sentences… -Your presentation is very-very general and maximum portion of the answer is out of context….different from the what the question aspires… -I think your answer is not at par with the question asked… Keep… Read more »

    anita raul
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Anita,
    -Very good introduction….
    -Under security challenges…first two points are good, the rest are incomplete and are very general…these are obvious points which should not be mentioned rather be understood through more wider points…
    -Mixed up ideas in governance as well…
    Overall, very general answer….an average one…

    Need to work on bringing specificity in your answer…A good answer requires wider relevant points arranged in logical order with flow in presentation always keeping in mind the demand of the question…each and every line should be talking the relevancy of question…

    Though, nice attempt…keep practicing…will improve for sure…keep writing…

    Marks awarded: 4/10

    Refer our model answer for better clarity…

    anita raul
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Anita, Need to bring maturity in your language… -There is a proper framework for any answer…without which there is no benefit of writing answer…i.e. Introduction, main body and conclusion…there is no indication of intro and main body in your answer…it starts randomly and finishes without completing any ideas… -The question no where asks about J&K…though it can be an example for Governor’s discretionary powers… It seems you are writing for the sake of writing only and not fulfilling the demand of the question… Kindly go through the topic before writing and plan your answer before writing on paper… Please… Read more »

    anita raul
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    anita raul

    thank u sir for reviewing i will improved my weak part ,thanks.

    Kapiushon
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    Hello sir, I have been writing for last 20 days and this platform has been immensely helpful. Especially to over come that huge initial inertia and want of perfection. Continuous feedback help us to know if we are in right direction and also gives us a push to work harder. Current affairs question are especially very good and are helping me in my topic wise preparation strategy (such as AI. block-chain, regulatory bodies, CBI, RBI etc) I have some suggestion- 1) Please provide a subject wise schedule for static part. synchronising it with mains test series would be a good… Read more »

    Pritam Kumar
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    Hello Kapiushon,
    We feel your concern as genuine and are thinking on you points. Will be coming up with new ideas soon…
    Keep writing…we team CD feel privileged to help you all in getting through this examination…Good Luck

    Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Pragnya,
    -Introduction seems to be okay…CC is not only storing and accessing…its amalgamation of various other facts…like…pool of shared resources include networks, servers, storage, applications, and services that can be rapidly provisioned and released with minimal management effort or minimal service provider interaction…
    -In 2nd para…we can not say its usage is limited…need regulation…
    -The rest of the points are good and well arranged…
    Overall, good answer…points are good and well written…keep it up…
    Marks awarded: 5.5/10

    Kapiushon
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    Kapiushon

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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Kapiushon,
    Answer is good structure wise but points are general…need to make them more specific…
    -Intro seems okay…The points of attitude are also okay…but they need supportive examples…
    -Too general approach in answer…

    Overall good…need to be more specific…
    Keep practicing…will improve for sure…
    Marks awarded: 4/10
    Refer our model answer for better clarity…

    Pragnya Smita Panigrahi
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    Pritam Kumar
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    Hi Prangya,
    -Very good answer and precisely written…Good articulation of language…
    -Very good introduction…nicely presented…
    -2nd paragraph, first line…it seems repetition of the sentences of question…need to change…avoid repetition…
    -The rest of the points are good and beautifully arranged…
    WELL DONE…keep it up…keep writing…
    Marks awarded: 7.5/12.5