4th January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

How is time maintained globally? Examine the recent proposal for two time zones from India’s national timekeeper. (150 W/10 M)

Question 2)

Highlight the key features of new guidelines issued by Ministry of Power regarding import and export of electricity and power trading with neighboring countries. Mentioning significance of 2018 guidelines discuss how the new regulations will help India in achieving the greener grid? (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 3)

Can recently launched Project “Sashakt” solve the mess of India’s banking sector? Critically Discuss. (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 4)

Ethics Case Study: You are posted as a DM in a small district. Your district suffers from socially backward problems like child marriage, female infanticide, dowry, etc. One day, a girl of about 18 years who is well educated, comes to you and informs you about her neighbors who are getting their daughter married at an age of 15 years. She tells you that she tried to convince her parents but was unsuccessful. You immediately reach the spot of marriage. You see that all the preparations have been made. When you talk to the family, you come to know that the family is not well educated and thinks that girls should be married early as they it’s the common practice in the whole village and they cannot go against it. Given below are some options. Discuss them with their merits and demerits. Also suggest which course of action would you take and why? a) Convince the family and ask them not to send their daughter to her in-laws place despite marriage being performed. b) Talk to the girl and know her stand as that is most important. c) Take strict action against the family under the law against child marriage. d) Initiating a drive in the area in order to prevent such incidents in future. (150 W/ 10 M)

 

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Kapiushon
Kapiushon
3 years ago

CDTEST20663
Answer 1
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Kapiushon
Kapiushon
3 years ago

CDTEST20663
Answer 1
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Kapiushon
Kapiushon
3 years ago

CDTEST20663
Answer 3
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lekha_27
3 years ago

CDTEST22496 Ans 2
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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  lekha_27

Hi lekha_27
Introduction need to be crisp and short
body- focus on guidelines and significance ie add few more points with example
green grid part need refinement-point wise explanation
conclusion is ok.

lekha_27
3 years ago

CDTEST22496 Ans 3comment image
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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  lekha_27

Hi Lekha_27
poor and story intro
body- poor elaboration and explanation especially last few points
conclusion- need to be optimistic, futuristic and short

lekha_27
3 years ago

CDTEST22496 Ans 1
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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  lekha_27

hi lekha_27
intro missing
poor explanation to the 1st part
advantages and disadvantages need proper focus with few specific points which need to mentioned which form the main argument.
conclusion to be futuristic and not CSIR story.
map should be in side and not in last with proper representation

gk
gk
3 years ago

CDTEST22580
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gk
gk
3 years ago

CDTEST22580
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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  gk

hi gk
intro-rephrasing of question is not required. add data/terms like energy security,diplomacy angle to broaden the aspect
body is ok add few points
last part missing??greener grid
conclusion ok

gk
gk
3 years ago

CDTEST22580
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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  gk

hi gk
intro is good just add NPA data to it
few opening line for 2nd para ie running line rather starting advantage abruptly
few more analysis of challenges
conclusion is ok

gk
gk
3 years ago

CDTEST22580
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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  gk

hi gk
1st part answered well
2nd part of question should have both pros and cons which is missing
then in conclusion mention findings

Stevie G
Stevie G
3 years ago

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Answer 3. Id: CDTEST22553

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Stevie G

hi Stevie G
well understanding of question…just elaborate in few lines rather just mentioning as you have done in 5 pronged strategy

what is needed is restructuring of your answer..
write in short para and focus on “Examine Aspect” of the question..
shorten your conclusion so that you can focus on above mentioned point.
keep writing…

Stevie G
Stevie G
3 years ago

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Answer 2 . ID: CDTEST22553

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Stevie G

hi Stevie G
introduction-don’t paste the lines from question and shorten intro part
body-
add few more points in features and significance.
greener grid part is totally out of context.
refer model answer and the article link given for further clarification.
conclusion is fine

Stevie G
Stevie G
3 years ago

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Answer 1 . Id : CDTEST22553

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Stevie G

hi Stevie G
intro- missing
1st part though answered but need refinement..
2nd part of question need elaboration which should include pros and cons..
prefer point wise rather writing long para
question doesn’t demand how it will be done. “Examine”
refer to model answer to understand the need of question

Tabassum
Tabassum
3 years ago

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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Tabassum

hi Tabassum
it is a 15 marker question…it need proper explanation,structure.
refer to model answer to understand the structuring
intro is fine.
elaborate upon key guidelines
emphasise on significance
greener grid missing??
refer to model answer

Tabassum
Tabassum
3 years ago

CDTEST22530
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n b
n b
3 years ago

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n b
n b
3 years ago
Reply to  n b

NOT CHECKED

n b
n b
3 years ago

CDTEST22416
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Gopinath Koteru
Gopinath Koteru
3 years ago

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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago

hi Gopinath Koteru
1st part is ok
but 2nd part is not upto mark. explain properly advantages and disadvantages
proper marking of map
conclusion missing

Rahul
3 years ago

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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Rahul

hi rahul
intro is fine. add some data to it
Project “Sashakt need further elaboration.
challenges part should not be one word,it need further explanation

Viney Kumar
Viney Kumar
3 years ago

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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Viney Kumar

hi Viney Kumar
few introductory lines needed.
shorten 1st part of question..
secondly focus on pros and cons
conclusion is ok

harsimran kaur
harsimran kaur
3 years ago

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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  harsimran kaur

hi harsimran kaur
1st part of question need further elaboration. ie how time is maintained globally.
rest part is fine..

harsimran kaur
harsimran kaur
3 years ago
Reply to  trojan123

Ya being little technical i could not address ist part,
Thanks for reviewing

dhritiman das
dhritiman das
3 years ago

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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  dhritiman das

hi dhritiman
you need urgent change in your answer writing style.Your answer seems to be rough work with poor handwriting.
In addition to you need to understand the demand of question.
conclusion missing

dhritiman das
dhritiman das
3 years ago

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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  dhritiman das

hi dhritiman
1st part of question missing
question is about examine you need to write advantage and disadvantage
your answer seems to be rough work…
content need improvement