4th January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

How is time maintained globally? Examine the recent proposal for two time zones from India’s national timekeeper. (150 W/10 M)

Question 2)

Highlight the key features of new guidelines issued by Ministry of Power regarding import and export of electricity and power trading with neighboring countries. Mentioning significance of 2018 guidelines discuss how the new regulations will help India in achieving the greener grid? (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 3)

Can recently launched Project “Sashakt” solve the mess of India’s banking sector? Critically Discuss. (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 4)

Ethics Case Study: You are posted as a DM in a small district. Your district suffers from socially backward problems like child marriage, female infanticide, dowry, etc. One day, a girl of about 18 years who is well educated, comes to you and informs you about her neighbors who are getting their daughter married at an age of 15 years. She tells you that she tried to convince her parents but was unsuccessful. You immediately reach the spot of marriage. You see that all the preparations have been made. When you talk to the family, you come to know that the family is not well educated and thinks that girls should be married early as they it’s the common practice in the whole village and they cannot go against it. Given below are some options. Discuss them with their merits and demerits. Also suggest which course of action would you take and why? a) Convince the family and ask them not to send their daughter to her in-laws place despite marriage being performed. b) Talk to the girl and know her stand as that is most important. c) Take strict action against the family under the law against child marriage. d) Initiating a drive in the area in order to prevent such incidents in future. (150 W/ 10 M)

 

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Kapiushon
Kapiushon
19 Feb, 2019

CDTEST20663
Answer 1
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    Kapiushon
    Kapiushon
    19 Feb, 2019

    CDTEST20663
    Answer 1
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      Kapiushon
      Kapiushon
      19 Feb, 2019

      CDTEST20663
      Answer 3
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        lekha_27
        19 Feb, 2019

        CDTEST22496 Ans 2
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          trojan123
          trojan123
          19 Feb, 2019

          Hi lekha_27
          Introduction need to be crisp and short
          body- focus on guidelines and significance ie add few more points with example
          green grid part need refinement-point wise explanation
          conclusion is ok.


            lekha_27
            19 Feb, 2019

            CDTEST22496 Ans 1
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              trojan123
              trojan123
              19 Feb, 2019

              hi lekha_27
              intro missing
              poor explanation to the 1st part
              advantages and disadvantages need proper focus with few specific points which need to mentioned which form the main argument.
              conclusion to be futuristic and not CSIR story.
              map should be in side and not in last with proper representation


                lekha_27
                19 Feb, 2019

                CDTEST22496 Ans 3comment image
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                  trojan123
                  trojan123
                  19 Feb, 2019

                  Hi Lekha_27
                  poor and story intro
                  body- poor elaboration and explanation especially last few points
                  conclusion- need to be optimistic, futuristic and short


                    gk
                    19 Feb, 2019

                    CDTEST22580
                    Ans 4comment imagecomment image


                      gk
                      19 Feb, 2019

                      CDTEST22580
                      Ans 2comment imagecomment image

                        trojan123
                        trojan123
                        19 Feb, 2019

                        hi gk
                        intro-rephrasing of question is not required. add data/terms like energy security,diplomacy angle to broaden the aspect
                        body is ok add few points
                        last part missing??greener grid
                        conclusion ok


                          gk
                          19 Feb, 2019

                          CDTEST22580
                          Ans 3comment imagecomment image

                            trojan123
                            trojan123
                            19 Feb, 2019

                            hi gk
                            intro is good just add NPA data to it
                            few opening line for 2nd para ie running line rather starting advantage abruptly
                            few more analysis of challenges
                            conclusion is ok


                              gk
                              19 Feb, 2019

                              CDTEST22580
                              Ans 1comment imagecomment image

                                trojan123
                                trojan123
                                19 Feb, 2019

                                hi gk
                                1st part answered well
                                2nd part of question should have both pros and cons which is missing
                                then in conclusion mention findings


                                  Stevie G
                                  Stevie G
                                  19 Feb, 2019

                                  comment image comment image

                                  Answer 1 . Id : CDTEST22553

                                    trojan123
                                    trojan123
                                    19 Feb, 2019

                                    hi Stevie G
                                    intro- missing
                                    1st part though answered but need refinement..
                                    2nd part of question need elaboration which should include pros and cons..
                                    prefer point wise rather writing long para
                                    question doesn’t demand how it will be done. “Examine”
                                    refer to model answer to understand the need of question


                                      Stevie G
                                      Stevie G
                                      19 Feb, 2019

                                      comment image comment image

                                      Answer 2 . ID: CDTEST22553

                                        trojan123
                                        trojan123
                                        19 Feb, 2019

                                        hi Stevie G
                                        introduction-don’t paste the lines from question and shorten intro part
                                        body-
                                        add few more points in features and significance.
                                        greener grid part is totally out of context.
                                        refer model answer and the article link given for further clarification.
                                        conclusion is fine


                                          Stevie G
                                          Stevie G
                                          19 Feb, 2019

                                          comment image comment image

                                          Answer 3. Id: CDTEST22553

                                            trojan123
                                            trojan123
                                            19 Feb, 2019

                                            hi Stevie G
                                            well understanding of question…just elaborate in few lines rather just mentioning as you have done in 5 pronged strategy

                                            what is needed is restructuring of your answer..
                                            write in short para and focus on “Examine Aspect” of the question..
                                            shorten your conclusion so that you can focus on above mentioned point.
                                            keep writing…


                                              Tabassum
                                              Tabassum
                                              19 Feb, 2019

                                              comment image CDTEST22530
                                              Ans 2:

                                                trojan123
                                                trojan123
                                                19 Feb, 2019

                                                hi Tabassum
                                                it is a 15 marker question…it need proper explanation,structure.
                                                refer to model answer to understand the structuring
                                                intro is fine.
                                                elaborate upon key guidelines
                                                emphasise on significance
                                                greener grid missing??
                                                refer to model answer


                                                  Tabassum
                                                  Tabassum
                                                  19 Feb, 2019

                                                  CDTEST22530
                                                  Ans 1:
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                                                    n b
                                                    n b
                                                    19 Feb, 2019

                                                    CDTEST22416
                                                    ANS 4.comment imagecomment image

                                                      n b
                                                      n b
                                                      19 Feb, 2019

                                                      NOT CHECKED


                                                        n b
                                                        n b
                                                        19 Feb, 2019

                                                        CDTEST22416
                                                        ANS 3.comment image


                                                          Gopinath Koteru
                                                          Gopinath Koteru
                                                          19 Feb, 2019

                                                          CDTEST22557
                                                          Ans 1comment image

                                                            trojan123
                                                            trojan123
                                                            19 Feb, 2019

                                                            hi Gopinath Koteru
                                                            1st part is ok
                                                            but 2nd part is not upto mark. explain properly advantages and disadvantages
                                                            proper marking of map
                                                            conclusion missing


                                                              Rahul
                                                              19 Feb, 2019

                                                              CDTEST22533
                                                              Ans 3 comment image

                                                                trojan123
                                                                trojan123
                                                                19 Feb, 2019

                                                                hi rahul
                                                                intro is fine. add some data to it
                                                                Project “Sashakt need further elaboration.
                                                                challenges part should not be one word,it need further explanation


                                                                  Viney Kumar
                                                                  Viney Kumar
                                                                  19 Feb, 2019

                                                                  comment imagecomment imageAns 1 CDTEST22513

                                                                    trojan123
                                                                    trojan123
                                                                    19 Feb, 2019

                                                                    hi Viney Kumar
                                                                    few introductory lines needed.
                                                                    shorten 1st part of question..
                                                                    secondly focus on pros and cons
                                                                    conclusion is ok


                                                                      trojan123
                                                                      trojan123
                                                                      19 Feb, 2019

                                                                      hi harsimran kaur
                                                                      1st part of question need further elaboration. ie how time is maintained globally.
                                                                      rest part is fine..

                                                                        harsimran kaur
                                                                        19 Feb, 2019

                                                                        Ya being little technical i could not address ist part,
                                                                        Thanks for reviewing


                                                                          trojan123
                                                                          trojan123
                                                                          19 Feb, 2019

                                                                          hi dhritiman
                                                                          you need urgent change in your answer writing style.Your answer seems to be rough work with poor handwriting.
                                                                          In addition to you need to understand the demand of question.
                                                                          conclusion missing


                                                                            trojan123
                                                                            trojan123
                                                                            19 Feb, 2019

                                                                            hi dhritiman
                                                                            1st part of question missing
                                                                            question is about examine you need to write advantage and disadvantage
                                                                            your answer seems to be rough work…
                                                                            content need improvement