Q.1 What are the factors responsible for the concentration of the iron and steel industry around the Great Lakes in the USA?

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  • In the intro, briefly mention how the region surrounding the Great Lakes combines the various factors necessary for the iron and steel industry.
  • In the body, mention the combination of various factors such as raw material such as coke, iron ore, and limestone, availability of power, water, and transport facilities, etc contributed to the development of the industry in the region.
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k.s.nandhini
k.s.nandhini
21 days ago

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6 days ago
Reply to  k.s.nandhini

Nandhini

Decent attempt, introduction is fine.
It will be nice if you can draw a small map showing the Great Lakes Region and the iron and steel industry around it.
Factors mentioned are good. You have covered multiple dimensions. Industrial inertia can also be mentioned.
Conclusion is good. Keep practicing. 🙂

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muskan garg
muskan garg
21 days ago

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Muskan

Nice attempt.
Introduction is good. Use of diagram is nice.
Factors mentioned are fine too, you can also mention industrial inertia, market development and govt policies in addition to the ones you have written.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂

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