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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/the-rope-of- federalism-and-an-unwanted- tug-of-war/article34784553.ece - In the intro, mention Article in the Constitution dealing with the All India Services and its creation.
- In the body mention the purpose of creation of All-India Services such as uniformity and high standard and securing administrative unity etc. In the next part mention the issues of control of the State and Union government and the possibility of conflicts.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to avoid the situation in which the State and Central government try to exert control over the All India Services officers and leads to a conflict.
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Vishal
You have written a good answer. In the introduction, mention article 312 of the constitution. Points under objectives are good.
However, in issues try to be a bit more specific for example you can write how the centre-state tussle plays out-
Concurrence of the relevant State government is required before an officer of its cadre is deputed to the Centre. Also, there must be prior consultation between the Centre and the State– but this general rule is violated by many governments.
Also, in case of any disagreement, the matter shall be decided by the Central Government and the State Government or State Governments concerned shall give effect to the decision of the Central Government- this creates a trust deficit between centre-state.
Rest of the points are good. Since the question is specifically asking about cente-state issues in context of AIS, you need to go a bit deeper in those points.
Nice answer. Keep writing. 🙂
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Anupam
I think you have written less content for a 15 mark question. Write in 2-3 pages, you will get accustomed to actual exam experience.
In the introduction, mention article 312 of the constitution.
In reasons for creation points are good, you can add– All India Services form the basic administrative system of India, help devise and implement welfare policies, developmental schemes and ensure efficient functioning of government machinery at the grassroots.
In issues, focus more on the centre-state tussle over control of the services- question is specifically asking for that, you can write in a bit of detail. You have mentioned friction but try to explain briefly-
Concurrence of the relevant State government is required before an officer of its cadre is deputed to the Centre. Also, there must be prior consultation between the Centre and the State– but this general rule is violated by many governments.
Also, in case of any disagreement, the matter shall be decided by the Central Government and the State Government or State Governments concerned shall give effect to the decision of the Central Government- this creates a trust deficit between centre-state.
Conclusion is good. Keep writing. 🙂
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Harshaa
There are many issues in this answer.
Introduction is good, but then you didn’t write the objective of the creation of the all India services. That is specifically asked, mention national integrity, unity, administrative reasons, uniformity in policy making etc Giving a passing reference in conclusion won’t count for much.
The 3rd paragraph of your answer is totally unwarranted, the question is not asking your views nor it is asking about the ‘West Bengal incident’. Better avoid such opinions unless specifically asked. Mention what are the issues, what the law says etc. You can mention these points in this context :
Concurrence of the relevant State government is required before an officer of its cadre is deputed to the Centre. Also, there must be prior consultation between the Centre and the State– but this general rule is violated by many governments.
Also, in case of any disagreement, the matter shall be decided by the Central Government and the State Government or State Governments concerned shall give effect to the decision of the Central Government but states are reluctant to do so- this creates a trust deficit between centre-state.
(Also, IAS officers are ultimately borne in State cadres which makes them subject to the control of the respective State governments as well, especially when they are in the employment of their States)
Also this is a 15 mark question, try to write in a bit of detail, you are writing very less now.
Read some other answers. Keep writing and improving. 🙂
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Ibrahim,
You have answered the first part very well. But in the 2nd part you have to mention what the controversy was, what are some of the issues which create a hindrance in the functioning of AIS(especially centre-state issues). Just mentioning there was a controversy is not enough in a 15 mark question.
You can mention these points in brief:
Concurrence of the relevant State government is required before an officer of its cadre is deputed to the Centre. Also, there must be prior consultation between the Centre and the State– but this general rule is violated by many governments.
Also, in case of any disagreement, the matter shall be decided by the Central Government and the State Government or State Governments concerned shall give effect to the decision of the Central Government but states are reluctant to do so- this creates a trust deficit between centre-state.
You can add some other points also. In conclusion, you can write some of the recommendations given by various committees like Sarkaria, Punchhi etc
You have made a nice attempt, also you should try to address all parts of the question.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Sumita
You have a written a very good answer. Flow of the answer is really nice.
You can add some more issues like abrupt transfer of officers, cartelization among officers etc
Also you can mention All India Service Rules 1951, which mandate concurrence with state government while deputing officers to centre but at the same time gives over riding powers to centre in case of disagreement.
Also, if you add some of the recommendations of various committees such as Sarkaria, Puncchi etc while concluding, it will add immense value to the answer.
Rest of the points mentioned are good.
Read some other answers, keep writing 🙂
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Ankita
You have written a nice answer. Introduction and body is good. You can mention some more issues like abrupt transfer of officers, cartelization among officers etc
Also you can mention All India Service Rules 1951, which mandate concurrence with state government while deputing officers to centre but at the same time gives over riding powers to centre in case of disagreement.
No need to mention about Alapan Bandopadhyay, Mamta etc. Question is not asking all these. You can just give an example that recently a controversy erupted in West Bengal after writing the statement I mentioned above.
It will be very good if you can mention 1-2 recommendations on this issue of committees like Sarkaria , Punchhi etc in conclusion.
Read some other answers. Keep writing. 🙂
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Utkarsha
Since the question explicitly asks about services are affected in case of centre-state conflict, you need to explain it a bit more in the issues you have written.
According to All India Service rules 1951,
Concurrence of the relevant State government is required before an officer of its cadre is deputed to the Centre. Also, there must be prior consultation between the Centre and the State– but this general rule is violated by many governments.
Also, in case of any disagreement, the matter shall be decided by the Central Government and the State Government or State Governments concerned shall give effect to the decision of the Central Government but states are reluctant to do so- this creates a trust deficit between centre-state.
You can mention these points. Rest of the points are very good, appointment is not done by state as you have written, however transfer and suspension can be done by them.
Introduction and conclusion is very good. You can mention 1-2 more recommendations of ARC or Sarkaria commission in conclusion.
Nice attempt. Keep writing. 🙂
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Deepika
Introduction is good, but then you didn’t write the objective of the creation of the all India services. That is specifically asked, mention national integrity, unity, administrative reasons, uniformity in policy making, better knowledge of grassroots etc
Also this is a 15 mark question, you should write in a bit more detail.
Since the question explicitly asks about how services are affected in case of centre-state conflict, you need to explain it a bit more – you can mention All India Service Rules 1951, which mandate concurrence with state government while deputing officers to centre but at the same time gives over riding powers to centre in case of disagreement. This creates centre- state trust deficit and officers are caught in crossfire.
Rest of the points are good, when writing statements like ‘ people lose faith etc’ , you should try to give a very short explanation also (why people lose faith).
You can mention 1-2 recommendations of Punchhi or Sarkaria commission in conclusion. It will give you some extra marks.
Nice attempt, keep writing. 🙂
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Aabha
You have made a nice attempt, introduction and first part is very good. However, since the question explicitly asks about services are affected in case of centre-state conflict, you need to explain it a bit more.
You can mention these points in brief:
Concurrence of the relevant State government is required before an officer of its cadre is deputed to the Centre. Also, there must be prior consultation between the Centre and the State– but this general rule is violated by many governments.
Also, in case of any disagreement, the matter shall be decided by the Central Government and the State Government or State Governments concerned shall give effect to the decision of the Central Government but states are reluctant to do so- this creates a trust deficit between centre-state and officers are caught in the cross fire.
Not very disciplined is a very blunt way of putting across your argument, need to be a bit more nuanced.
You can mention 1-2 more recommendations of ARC or Sarkaria commission in conclusion.
Read some other answers. Keep writing. 🙂
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Chandrama
Nice answer, especially the first part about objectives are very well mentioned. You can write all the points under one heading only, in the way forward also you have mentioned some objectives only.
Also no need to write about the origin of civil services, not required. Instead you can explain the centre-issue conflict in a bit of detail-
Acc to all India service rules 1951, Concurrence of the relevant State government is required before an officer of its cadre is deputed to the Centre. Also, there must be prior consultation between the Centre and the State– but this general rule is violated by many governments.
Also, in case of any disagreement, the matter shall be decided by the Central Government and the State Government or State Governments concerned shall give effect to the decision of the Central Government but states are reluctant to do so- this creates a trust deficit between centre-state and officers are caught in the cross fire.
Some more issues can be mentioned- abrupt transfer, suspension of officers, cartelization among officers etc
In conclusion if you mention some recommendations of Sarkaria or Punchhi commission etc , it will be very good.
Keep writing. Read some other answers too. 🙂
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Kartikey
First part is well mentioned, I think it should be article 312.
In 2nd part, you need mention some reasons for the conflict which have arose due to all India service rules 1951-
Concurrence of the relevant State government is required before an officer of its cadre is deputed to the Centre. Also, there must be prior consultation between the Centre and the State– but this general rule is violated by many governments.
Also, in case of any disagreement, the matter shall be decided by the Central Government and the State Government or State Governments concerned shall give effect to the decision of the Central Government but states are reluctant to do so- this creates a trust deficit between centre-state and officers are caught in the cross fire.
Rest of the points are good, just need to mention why conflict happens.
It will also justify your conclusion. It will be very good if you can mention 1-2 recommendations on this issue of committees like Sarkaria , Punchhi etc
Nice attempt, keep writing. 🙂
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Mradul
Since the question explicitly asks about services are affected in case of centre-state conflict, you need to explain it a bit more in the issues you have written.
According to All India Service rules 1951,
Concurrence of the relevant State government is required before an officer of its cadre is deputed to the Centre. Also, there must be prior consultation between the Centre and the State– but this general rule is violated by many governments.
Also, in case of any disagreement, the matter shall be decided by the Central Government and the State Government or State Governments concerned shall give effect to the decision of the Central Government but states are reluctant to do so- this creates a trust deficit between centre-state and officers are caught in the cross fire.
These points should find a mention in the answer, otherwise it becomes very generic.
Rest of the points are good, especially you have mentioned committees etc, that is very good.
Nice attempt, keep writing. 🙂
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Shivanshu
You have written well. Especially issues part.
It will be very good if you can mention 2-3 recommendations on this issue of committees like Sarkaria , Punchhi etc in way forward section.
In objectives mention about administrative role of services too -All India Services form the basic administrative system of India , can help devise and implement welfare policies, developmental schemes and ensure efficient functioning of government machinery at the grassroots.
Also, please try to scan the image and upload, otherwise click properly fitting the whole image in the screen, some parts of the answer are unreadable.
Nice attempt, keep writing. 🙂
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Vishnu
Nice answer, you have mentioned many points, that is good.
Introduction and objectives are very good.
Issues also you have written nicely, you can mention All India Service Rules 1951, which mandate concurrence with state government while deputing officers to centre but at the same time gives over riding powers to centre in case of disagreement. This creates a centre-state trust deficit and officers are caught in the crossfire.
In conclusion, you have mentioned Sarkaria commission, 2nd ARC that is good but if you can mention 1-2 recommendations also, it will be very nice.
Good attempt, keep writing. 🙂
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