23rd November 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

It is said that most of the freshwater on earth is locked up in the Polar Regions. Can harvesting icebergs be the solution to the global water crisis? (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 2)

Will granting constitutional status to NCBC have significant impact on the socio-economic conditions of the OBC’s. Critically examine (10 marks)

Question 3)

What is the Twin Balance Sheet Problem of India? Will this lead to an economic crisis? What is the solution to avoid a crisis? (15 Marks)

Question 4)

Explain the following in not more than 70 words each. (a) Work ethics in government. (b) Orthodox loyalty to superiors in administration. (c) Accountability (d) Self-imposed morality v/s state imposed laws. (4×2.5=10 Marks)

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  • 37 Replies to “23rd November 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement”

      1. Hi Prafull,
        Too lengthy discussion…the word limit for this answer is 150 words…you have crossed 300 words…Its like writing an essay…
        -Too much of historical background…not required…irrelevant…come directly on NCBC and according to it a constitutional status…recognize which points are necessary to the topic and which are not…
        -Points under effects are good…
        -The rest of the points are good…and well arranged…
        Your introductory part is too long…and full of irrelevant points…

        Overall, due to lengthy, this answer will be considered as average one….Keep practicing will improve for sure…
        Keep writing…
        Marks Awarded: 3.5/10

        Refer best answers written be others or our model answer for better clarity…

      1. Hi Prafull,
        The answer seems to be very general…
        -Introduction is good…
        -Points under prevented huge crisis is okay…though more relevance points can be brought…
        Way forward is general…Mention points like…5/25 Refinancing of Infrastructure Scheme,
        Private Asset Reconstruction Companies (ARCs),
        The Strategic Debt Restructuring (SDR) scheme,
        Asset Quality Review (AQR), and
        The Scheme for Sustainable Structuring of Stressed Assets (S4A) etc…
        -Points under conclusion seems to be okay…
        Overall, an average approach….Keep practicing will improve for sure…
        Keep writing…
        Marks awarded: 5/15

        Refer some of the best answers reviewed or our model answer for better clarity…

      1. Hi Shefali,
        -Introduction seems poor…points and ideas are good but should be written in paragraph instead in bullet form…
        -Too general points under benefits…
        -Under challenges also the points are too general…
        -Some of the points in conclusion is good but need to mention in paragraph instead enumerating…

        -This is a too general answer, and shows lack of conceptual clarity. Answer is written in hurry manner without proper plan.

        Though good attempt…keep writing…will improve for sure…
        Refer the best answer reviewed or our model answer for in-depth knowledge of points arrangement and framework…

        Marks awarded: 4.5/15

      1. Hi Sandeep,
        -Introductory para is okay but does not completely introduce the topic…1st para along with 3rd para may create introduction….
        2nd para is irrelevant….we don’t need to talk about such stuff…
        -Under feature…2nd point is repeatitive…4th point – legal power regarding what?..clarity needed…
        -2nd page…issues with the bill…its not a bill now…it has been accorded the constitutional status…points beneath are narrow and lack clarity…
        -Conclusion seems poor…

        Overall, this is a just above average answer…in between average and good…
        The answer lacks in some respects:
        -Linkages among ideas, proper arrangement of ideas, proper explanation of the points etc….

        Refer the answer written by Anshika Singh or our model answer for better clarity…
        Keep writing…
        Marks awarded: 4.5/10

      1. Hi Shefali,
        -Introduction should and must be in paragraph…point-wise shows, absence of coherence among ideas…
        -2nd para is unnecessary eating our word limit…not needed…
        -Points under role of NCBC need further clarification and logical arrangement…Maturity in language required here…
        -Under critiques…2nd point seem biased…change the way of presentation…
        -way forward is good…but need to be mentioned in paragraph..
        At least Introduction and Conclusion should be in paragraphs and rest of the points can be mentioned under bullet…

        Your ideas in points are good…but explanation shows you are limited in knowledge or somewhere you are confined…think broadly…

        Keep writing…will improve for sure…
        Marks awarded: 5/10

      1. Hi Sandeep,
        -Introduction should not be in points…its recommended that at least intro and conclusion should be written in paragraphs…though idea you have mentioned here is nice…
        -The point how it leads towards an economic crisis…You have not taken a clear stand and most of the points explaining the origin of this problem…IS IT REALLY CRISIS IN INDIAN CONTEXT?
        -Ideas in conclusion is mixed up and not arranged logically…not conveying complete meaning…clarity needed…

        Overall good approach…keep writing…will improve…

        Bring maturity in your language…Work on articulating sentences and language…
        Keep writing…
        Marks awarded: 5/15

      1. Hi Pragnya,
        (a) Work ethics can not be written somewhere…it is more like responsibility, dedication, involvement with sincerity by an individual…Though your explanation seems good but not specific…need to think more with micro perspective…individual level…

        Though good…
        Marks awarded: 1/2.5

        (b) The explanation is good…however, also mention that one should not support in wrong means of seniors and when time permits whistleblowing should be considered…
        Good point…
        Marks awarded: 1.5/2.5

        (c) Accountability has been explained in poor way…it is taking responsibility of one’s own action…Think in micro perspective…
        Marks awarded: 1/2.5

        (d) Good explanation…well written…
        Marks awarded: 2/2.5

        Nice attempt…keep writing…

        Overall Marks: 5.5/10

      1. Hi Sandeep,
        -First two para in intro seems irrelevant and explains the things in illogical way… Third para can form the good introduction…
        -There is no connectivity among points and ideas…
        -Under positive of initiative…first point is incomplete…the sentence itself is incomplete…
        -Third point seems irrelevant…women does not go to Antarctica to fetch water…change the way of presentation…
        -All the points under positive initiative seems very general…
        -Bring points which are more logical and pragmatic…
        -Points of challenges are good…but explanation is poor…
        -Way forward seems to be okay…however some of the points like harnessing saline water…its costly and goes contradictory of your idea mentioned under challenges…

        There are grammatical errors in some of the sentences…need to improve asap…

        Overall, this answer is an average one…The presentation shows you lack factual knowledge regarding topic…

        Refer the best answer reviewed indicating good marks or our model answer for better clarity…
        Keep writing…
        Marks awarded: 4.5/15

      1. Hi Pragnya Smita,
        -Discussion is excellent and well arranged with good weight in points…
        -You have brought too many ideas in excellent way…good one…
        -However, the arrangement on 2nd page…’mission indradhanush’ in one side of the page in between the conversation does not seem good…arrange the point with the flow of answer…

        The rest is okay…and please bring conclusion…without conclusion it is like leaving the conversation in middle…so finish the conversation…

        Overall, excellent approach….Keep it up…well done..
        Keep writing…
        Marks awarded: 7/15

      1. Hi Anshika,
        -Introduction is very good…
        -Under benefits – first two points are very good…the next two points need further justification…
        -The rest of the points are very good and well presented..
        -Excellent points in conclusion…
        Overall, the answer is excellent…well done…keep it up…
        Keep writing…
        Marks awarded: 7.5/15

      1. Hi Anshika,
        -Introduction is good…
        -1st page, 2nd para…the word ‘presently’ (it was the matter of past)…use before the enactment of NCBC…be cautious…
        -The rest of the points are very good…well written…nicely presented…
        Overall, the answer is excellent…
        -WELL DONE…Keep it up…
        Keep writing…
        Marks awarded: 7/10

      1. Hi Anshika,
        -The answer is excellent…Good flow of points…precisely written…and well presented…well done…

        On one point – Repealing of Bank Nationalisation Act and SBI Act….we should suggest to bring amendment rather repealing them completely…repealing will bring chaos and may arise other problems as well….

        The rest of the points are well and good…
        Nice approach keep writing…

        Marks awarded: 8/15

      1. Hi Shivani,
        -Points in the answer is excellent…well arranged with good flow…
        -However, the presentation looks a bit poor…Whatever have been mentioned in diagram i.e. challenges and benefits, need to mention points-wise… …Unnecessary decoration on page is not recommendable…
        The rest of the points and presentation is very good…well done….

        Keep writing…
        Marks awarded: 7.5/15

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