8th January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

By offering an ideological critique of the western civilization in its modern phase, Gandhiji was effectively contesting the moral legitimacy of the Raj that rested on a stated assumption of the superiority of the west. Comment (10 marks)

Question 2)

The recent year has witnessed increased anti-India protest in the Valley of Jammu and Kashmir with rising insurgency and intense counter insurgency operations causing acute distress. Discuss the region behind such prolonged situation and suggest suitable strategy to tackle the problem. (12 ½ M)

Question 3)

What are the main functions of the EBRD? Recently India has become member of EBRD, what benefits will India derive from its membership? (10 M)

Question 4)

With the decrement of ethics and moral values and increasing demand for standards such as accountability and responsibility in public services, what are the ethical concerns and dilemmas that may arise for a public servant? How can a public servant prepare himself to face these ethical challenges so as to perform his duties efficiently? ( 10 marks 150 words)

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Kapiushon
Kapiushon
19 Feb, 2019

CDTEST20663
Answer 1
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    trojan123
    trojan123
    19 Feb, 2019

    hi Kapiushon
    your introduction is very poor confusing and repetition of words.
    In Body-
    add few more points and heavy weight words…
    In way forward, you need to mention schemes like himayat, roshini etc.
    best practices by NGO’s, state govt. to add weight to answer.
    otherwise your answer seems to be superficial.
    conclusion is also poor
    lastly u need to work upon your handwriting, spelling asap.
    refer to model answer..
    keep writing.


      Kapiushon
      Kapiushon
      19 Feb, 2019

      CDTEST20663
      Answer 1comment image comment image

        trojan123
        trojan123
        19 Feb, 2019

        hi Kapiushon
        you need to work upon introduction.
        secondly, you have explained just 3 points..rather shorten your points to add few more points like swaraj, swadeshi, rural deindustrialization etc..
        separate it in 2 parts like british ideology and 2nd part as gandhi critique…
        refer to model answer to see more points
        keep writing


          lekha_27
          19 Feb, 2019

          CDTEST22496 Ans 3
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            lekha_27
            19 Feb, 2019

            CDTEST22496 Ans 1
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              trojan123
              trojan123
              19 Feb, 2019

              hi lekha_27
              your answer good.
              what you need to shorten your 1st para, so that you can add upon other aspects of western ideology..and other aspects of Gandhian ideology and how it countered western ideology
              keep writing..
              refer to model answer


                lekha_27
                19 Feb, 2019

                CDTEST22496 Ans 2
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                  trojan123
                  trojan123
                  19 Feb, 2019

                  hi lekha_27
                  your answer seems to be superficial..
                  1st shorten your introduction, which will give you space to write more in body
                  2nd you need to give example/facts to support your points.
                  you have missed points like political instability, glorification of terrorists, changing pattern of J&K clash…
                  3rd mention govt schemes, armed forces initiatives
                  refer model answer
                  keep writing…


                    Stevie G
                    Stevie G
                    19 Feb, 2019

                    comment image comment image

                    Answer 2 . ID: CDTEST22553

                      trojan123
                      trojan123
                      19 Feb, 2019

                      hi Stevie G
                      your intro has no correlation with question. please don’t experiment with your answer writing…
                      2nd your body seems to be repetitive and haphazard…you need to short and to the point backed with examples.
                      3rd way forward should mention govt schemes..
                      you have mentioned intitiatives by armed forces..good point
                      conclusion missing

                      keep writing
                      refer to model answer


                        Stevie G
                        Stevie G
                        19 Feb, 2019

                        comment image comment image

                        Answer 3 . ID: CDTEST22553

                          trojan123
                          trojan123
                          19 Feb, 2019

                          hi Stevie G
                          please shorten your intro so that incorporate more points in body.
                          otherwise your answer is good, to the point.
                          keep writing
                          refer to model answer


                            gk
                            gk
                            19 Feb, 2019

                            CDTEST22580
                            Ans 1comment imagecomment image

                              trojan123
                              trojan123
                              19 Feb, 2019

                              Hi GK,
                              intro is missing.
                              body-
                              british ideology part is good
                              gandhi critique is good.. add examples to it and few other points.

                              keep writing
                              refer to model answer.


                                gk
                                gk
                                19 Feb, 2019

                                CDTEST22580
                                Ans 2comment imagecomment image

                                  trojan123
                                  trojan123
                                  19 Feb, 2019

                                  Hi GK,
                                  your intro is fine, but your body part is poor..need improvement asap
                                  you need to support your points with examples/facts otherwise it seems superficial..

                                  In way forward
                                  1st point (OPERATION ALL OUT) is not the solution..
                                  2nd your points are below average.. ie generalised points will not fetch you marks
                                  mention govt schemes, initiatives of armed forces etc.

                                  refer to model answer
                                  keep writing


                                    gk
                                    gk
                                    19 Feb, 2019

                                    CDTEST22580
                                    Ans 3comment imagecomment image

                                      trojan123
                                      trojan123
                                      19 Feb, 2019

                                      Hi GK,
                                      very well articulated answer..keep it up..
                                      just cut out 2-3 lines in intro ie historical aspect not needed…

                                      keep writing

                                        The Last Crusader
                                        The Last Crusader
                                        19 Feb, 2019

                                        Hi GK,

                                        The overall presentation is good. You have mentioned functions and benefits in good pointed manner.
                                        If i have interpreted right from your answer, it might be a content error in context of benefits to India. EBRD has focused its area in central-eastern Europe and central Asia only. It may not invest in Indian private sector.

                                        If its ok with you,Please review mine.


                                          dark_horse16
                                          dark_horse16
                                          19 Feb, 2019

                                          CDTEST22756
                                          Ans 2comment imagecomment imagecomment image

                                            trojan123
                                            trojan123
                                            19 Feb, 2019

                                            hi dark_horse16
                                            overall your answer is fine with good examples in way forward..
                                            what is needed is to add some examples to support your answer otherwise it will be superficial..
                                            2nd also mention govt initiatives in way forward..
                                            3rd conclusion is poor.. need improvement..

                                            keep writing
                                            refer model answer.


                                              gk
                                              gk
                                              19 Feb, 2019

                                              CDTEST22580
                                              Ans 4comment imagecomment image


                                                The Last Crusader
                                                The Last Crusader
                                                19 Feb, 2019

                                                Answer to Q3: EBRDcomment image comment image

                                                  gk
                                                  gk
                                                  19 Feb, 2019

                                                  Hi The Last Crusader.
                                                  I’m not that good at reviewing answers. Nice presentation and a well written answer.

                                                    The Last Crusader
                                                    The Last Crusader
                                                    19 Feb, 2019

                                                    Same here,:)

                                                    I think we all in dire need to improve on this front (reviewing our own answers) as well.

                                                      The Last Crusader
                                                      The Last Crusader
                                                      19 Feb, 2019

                                                      Self Review:
                                                      Repetition of words(e.g promote) in answer.
                                                      Conclusion is not well formulated.
                                                      Need to provide more clear info, not to generalize statements


                                                        Viney Kumar
                                                        Viney Kumar
                                                        19 Feb, 2019

                                                        Ans 1 CDTEST22513comment imagecomment image

                                                          trojan123
                                                          trojan123
                                                          19 Feb, 2019

                                                          hi Viney Kumar
                                                          your answer seems to be essay/story type…with minimum points related to the questions..
                                                          you need to work on answer writing asap…
                                                          refer to model answer


                                                            Manish yadav
                                                            Manish yadav
                                                            19 Feb, 2019

                                                            answer 1comment image

                                                              trojan123
                                                              trojan123
                                                              19 Feb, 2019

                                                              hi Manish yadav
                                                              the answer you have uploaded seems to be incomplete…
                                                              please ensure from next time that you have uploaded full answer
                                                              comment image

                                                                Manish yadav
                                                                Manish yadav
                                                                19 Feb, 2019

                                                                Thanks for the review


                                                                  Manish yadav
                                                                  Manish yadav
                                                                  19 Feb, 2019

                                                                  answer 2
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                                                                    trojan123
                                                                    trojan123
                                                                    19 Feb, 2019

                                                                    hi Manish yadav
                                                                    please upload answer in proper way..
                                                                    intro is good.
                                                                    body-
                                                                    reasons-
                                                                    main points has been missed, few points can be clubbed in one (ex point and 2 ), add examples without it will be superficial.
                                                                    way forward-
                                                                    shorten your points so that you can accommodate more points…
                                                                    add govt schemes.

                                                                    last para of your ans should be conclusion with optimism.

                                                                    refer model answer.

                                                                      Manish yadav
                                                                      Manish yadav
                                                                      19 Feb, 2019

                                                                      Thank you of your reviews , I will try to mend my mistakes nd not to create in next answer


                                                                        dhritiman das
                                                                        dhritiman das
                                                                        19 Feb, 2019

                                                                        Ans2.comment imagecomment image

                                                                          trojan123
                                                                          trojan123
                                                                          19 Feb, 2019

                                                                          hi dhritiman@iim dropout,
                                                                          you need to improve your handwriting and answer writing style asap..
                                                                          it seems to be rough work…with so many vertical-horizontal line…

                                                                          lastly your answer is below average with poor content

                                                                          refer model answer.


                                                                            dhritiman das
                                                                            dhritiman das
                                                                            19 Feb, 2019

                                                                            Ans1.comment imagecomment image

                                                                              trojan123
                                                                              trojan123
                                                                              19 Feb, 2019

                                                                              hi dhritiman@disqus_TIr2Jn1kED:disqus
                                                                              you need to improve your handwriting and answer writing style asap..
                                                                              it seems to be rough work…with so many vertical-horizontal line…

                                                                              intro missing, which western ideology he opposed needs to be mentioned…
                                                                              overall poor content,presentation, haphazard writing style

                                                                              refer model answer.

                                                                                dhritiman das
                                                                                dhritiman das
                                                                                19 Feb, 2019

                                                                                Thnk u ..latley i have changed