8th January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

By offering an ideological critique of the western civilization in its modern phase, Gandhiji was effectively contesting the moral legitimacy of the Raj that rested on a stated assumption of the superiority of the west. Comment (10 marks)

Question 2)

The recent year has witnessed increased anti-India protest in the Valley of Jammu and Kashmir with rising insurgency and intense counter insurgency operations causing acute distress. Discuss the region behind such prolonged situation and suggest suitable strategy to tackle the problem. (12 ½ M)

Question 3)

What are the main functions of the EBRD? Recently India has become member of EBRD, what benefits will India derive from its membership? (10 M)

Question 4)

With the decrement of ethics and moral values and increasing demand for standards such as accountability and responsibility in public services, what are the ethical concerns and dilemmas that may arise for a public servant? How can a public servant prepare himself to face these ethical challenges so as to perform his duties efficiently? ( 10 marks 150 words)

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Kapiushon
Kapiushon
3 years ago

CDTEST20663
Answer 1
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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Kapiushon

hi Kapiushon
your introduction is very poor confusing and repetition of words.
In Body-
add few more points and heavy weight words…
In way forward, you need to mention schemes like himayat, roshini etc.
best practices by NGO’s, state govt. to add weight to answer.
otherwise your answer seems to be superficial.
conclusion is also poor
lastly u need to work upon your handwriting, spelling asap.
refer to model answer..
keep writing.

Kapiushon
Kapiushon
3 years ago

CDTEST20663
Answer 1comment image comment image

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Kapiushon

hi Kapiushon
you need to work upon introduction.
secondly, you have explained just 3 points..rather shorten your points to add few more points like swaraj, swadeshi, rural deindustrialization etc..
separate it in 2 parts like british ideology and 2nd part as gandhi critique…
refer to model answer to see more points
keep writing

lekha_27
3 years ago

CDTEST22496 Ans 3
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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  lekha_27

hi lekha_27
it seems you have missed the functions of EBRD or had tried to club it with intro..
please refer to model answer for functions of EBRD.
benefits points needs to be improved…you have missed major benefits of EBRD for india…
please refer to model answer
or
https://cfo.economictimes.indiatimes.com/news/so-why-does-india-want-membership-of-the-ebrd/61768699

lekha_27
3 years ago

CDTEST22496 Ans 1
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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  lekha_27

hi lekha_27
your answer good.
what you need to shorten your 1st para, so that you can add upon other aspects of western ideology..and other aspects of Gandhian ideology and how it countered western ideology
keep writing..
refer to model answer

lekha_27
3 years ago

CDTEST22496 Ans 2
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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  lekha_27

hi lekha_27
your answer seems to be superficial..
1st shorten your introduction, which will give you space to write more in body
2nd you need to give example/facts to support your points.
you have missed points like political instability, glorification of terrorists, changing pattern of J&K clash…
3rd mention govt schemes, armed forces initiatives
refer model answer
keep writing…

Stevie G
Stevie G
3 years ago

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Answer 3 . ID: CDTEST22553

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Stevie G

hi Stevie G
please shorten your intro so that incorporate more points in body.
otherwise your answer is good, to the point.
keep writing
refer to model answer

Stevie G
Stevie G
3 years ago

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Answer 2 . ID: CDTEST22553

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Stevie G

hi Stevie G
your intro has no correlation with question. please don’t experiment with your answer writing…
2nd your body seems to be repetitive and haphazard…you need to short and to the point backed with examples.
3rd way forward should mention govt schemes..
you have mentioned intitiatives by armed forces..good point
conclusion missing

keep writing
refer to model answer

The Last Crusader
The Last Crusader
3 years ago

Answer to Q3: EBRDcomment image comment image

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago

HI The Last Crusader
PLEASE DON’T WRITE STORY INTRO..IT WILL KILL YOUR SPACE FOR BODY…
Functions part need to be backed by examples and clear (not generalised points)
conclusion part is not upto the mark and not clear, repetition of words..
keep writing
refer to model answer or
https://cfo.economictimes.indiatimes.com/news/so-why-does-india-want-membership-of-the-ebrd/61768699

gk
gk
3 years ago

Hi The Last Crusader.
I’m not that good at reviewing answers. Nice presentation and a well written answer.

The Last Crusader
The Last Crusader
3 years ago
Reply to  gk

Same here,:)

I think we all in dire need to improve on this front (reviewing our own answers) as well.

The Last Crusader
The Last Crusader
3 years ago

Self Review:
Repetition of words(e.g promote) in answer.
Conclusion is not well formulated.
Need to provide more clear info, not to generalize statements

gk
gk
3 years ago

CDTEST22580
Ans 4comment imagecomment image

dark_horse16
dark_horse16
3 years ago

CDTEST22756
Ans 2comment imagecomment imagecomment image

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  dark_horse16

hi dark_horse16
overall your answer is fine with good examples in way forward..
what is needed is to add some examples to support your answer otherwise it will be superficial..
2nd also mention govt initiatives in way forward..
3rd conclusion is poor.. need improvement..

keep writing
refer model answer.

gk
gk
3 years ago

CDTEST22580
Ans 3comment imagecomment image

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  gk

Hi GK,
very well articulated answer..keep it up..
just cut out 2-3 lines in intro ie historical aspect not needed…

keep writing

The Last Crusader
The Last Crusader
3 years ago
Reply to  gk

Hi GK,

The overall presentation is good. You have mentioned functions and benefits in good pointed manner.
If i have interpreted right from your answer, it might be a content error in context of benefits to India. EBRD has focused its area in central-eastern Europe and central Asia only. It may not invest in Indian private sector.

If its ok with you,Please review mine.

gk
gk
3 years ago

CDTEST22580
Ans 2comment imagecomment image

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  gk

Hi GK,
your intro is fine, but your body part is poor..need improvement asap
you need to support your points with examples/facts otherwise it seems superficial..

In way forward
1st point (OPERATION ALL OUT) is not the solution..
2nd your points are below average.. ie generalised points will not fetch you marks
mention govt schemes, initiatives of armed forces etc.

refer to model answer
keep writing

gk
gk
3 years ago

CDTEST22580
Ans 1comment imagecomment image

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  gk

Hi GK,
intro is missing.
body-
british ideology part is good
gandhi critique is good.. add examples to it and few other points.

keep writing
refer to model answer.

Viney Kumar
Viney Kumar
3 years ago

Ans 1 CDTEST22513comment imagecomment image

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Viney Kumar

hi Viney Kumar
your answer seems to be essay/story type…with minimum points related to the questions..
you need to work on answer writing asap…
refer to model answer

Manish yadav
Manish yadav
3 years ago

answer 1comment image

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Manish yadav

hi Manish yadav
the answer you have uploaded seems to be incomplete…
please ensure from next time that you have uploaded full answer
comment image

Manish yadav
Manish yadav
3 years ago
Reply to  trojan123

Thanks for the review

Manish yadav
Manish yadav
3 years ago

answer 2
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trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  Manish yadav

hi Manish yadav
please upload answer in proper way..
intro is good.
body-
reasons-
main points has been missed, few points can be clubbed in one (ex point and 2 ), add examples without it will be superficial.
way forward-
shorten your points so that you can accommodate more points…
add govt schemes.

last para of your ans should be conclusion with optimism.

refer model answer.

Manish yadav
Manish yadav
3 years ago
Reply to  trojan123

Thank you of your reviews , I will try to mend my mistakes nd not to create in next answer

dhritiman das
dhritiman das
3 years ago

Ans2.comment imagecomment image

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  dhritiman das

hi dhritiman@iim dropout,
you need to improve your handwriting and answer writing style asap..
it seems to be rough work…with so many vertical-horizontal line…

lastly your answer is below average with poor content

refer model answer.

dhritiman das
dhritiman das
3 years ago

Ans1.comment imagecomment image

trojan123
trojan123
3 years ago
Reply to  dhritiman das

hi dhritiman@disqus_TIr2Jn1kED:disqus
you need to improve your handwriting and answer writing style asap..
it seems to be rough work…with so many vertical-horizontal line…

intro missing, which western ideology he opposed needs to be mentioned…
overall poor content,presentation, haphazard writing style

refer model answer.

dhritiman das
dhritiman das
3 years ago
Reply to  trojan123

Thnk u ..latley i have changed